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Autumn
and Spring Essay, English Composition Writing on Autumn and Spring,
Example Student Essays
----------- November
9, 2009 Author: Gong Si Yu
October day, my mother go to Jilin things, just me to rest, so
fortunate to go together with the mother. Along the way the scenery
outside the window like the one the picture, from my eyes by.
Autumn field really America ah!
Is the first time I saw that golden rice. A gust of wind blowing,
the wind dancing golden rice golden, like a golden sea, a wave
pushed a wave, very spectacular, it full of rice grain to show off
the fruits of their own.
You see, there are a golden corn piles of gold, like a seat Jinshan.
Raising black and red sorghum red red face like a bit farmer uncle
happy faces.
Vegetable garden, the waist-high in soy, black Litou yellow, pods
are two-inch long foot. Open the pod, collections of beans shining
with golden light, like a few small baby is asleep. The distance to
see Yi Keke cabbage, and bundles of green onions ... ...
Into the field to see the beautiful uncle were farmers. Although
they found sweating can be very happy heart, because the dealer had
a good harvest. Farmers uncle's efforts have not been in vain,
ushered in the fruit harvest hill and dale. Without the hard work
the farmers there is no uncle of our affluence. Farmers to use their
hands as brushes, to the earth as the paper, creating a picturesque
beauty of picture.
Which white patches of red, yellow, green fields, constitute a
beautiful picture of autumn.
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Charming Binjiang Road ------------ November 9, 2009 Author: Dunn
Tao
Wanzhou District Binjiang Road is a beautiful scenic spots.
Today, I play, and his father to the Riverside Road. When we looked
around to the left, the Yangtze River as a giant mirror. Riverside
ship at anchor, waiting for the passenger's travel passenger, large
cargo ships ... ... Bridge across the Yangtze River at the river
surface, like a rainbow from heaven. Mercedes-Benz and had a
spaceship, like the rocket upside-Benz in the river surface. In
front of some fitness equipment, where many people exercise, there
are adults, the elderly, as well as children, he (she) had some of
the badminton; some playing tennis; there's playing table tennis. In
my right is the wide roads, street car steady stream. Horse side of
the road one block high-rise buildings. In the Riverside roadside
stands a uniquely shaped building - the Three Gorges Star Stadium,
it looked like an alien coming from a flying saucer, it all
themselves.
Night, Binjiang Road, more beautiful. As night fell, when Binjiang
Road, became the light of the sea. The river sparkling lights, like
the colorful fireworks, floating down the earth. On the road a
string of bright lights, as the shining river, endless torrents.
Rainbow lights dazzling high-rise buildings, warm welcome to
visitors from continental seas.
Binjiang Road is a bright pearl in Wanzhou.
Chongqing Wanzhou Telegraph Road Primary School third-grade Dunn Tao
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Autumn Field ------------ November 7, 2009 Author: Chen Yuling
Autumn quietly came, she was wearing fall clothing, with the joy of
harvest. Than the spring, summer, winter, bright, and more
attractive.
Autumn, the fields, then golden ears of rice, put on an autumn girl
brought Autumn, head studded with golden beads, smile and laugh to
see Napian rice Wanle Yao, breeze rice fields, filled with waves of
golden waves, people revel in which intoxicated with this piece of
beauty in the golden rice fields.
Well, Chinese parasol tree leaves, a one to settle down again, they
seem to be to that of a golden-yellow "butterfly" dance in the fall
... ... in the number of roadside ginkgo, the hanging one to a small
fan, burst of autumn breezes rustle, as if this charming little
gingko fans gave the roadside are busy people, while, more leaves
fall on the ground, like a gorgeous golden yellow blanket child.
Rice fields that edge into the grass until the fall of that moment,
while the vibrant grass had been changed, it was too cold fear that
the fall in the face of autumn days, the advent of grass began to
wither, and it's looking is also slowly dim, it is to leave the cold
of autumn, it is to hide the depths, they are
Enjoy the beauty of autumn in your time, I would very much still is
so heroic glow, but the fate of the case, they only temporarily and
to say goodbye to the autumn. To tell you: It is not the spring is
beautiful, with life and hope in fact fall more exciting, it brings
to people the joy of harvest.
Ah, autumn fields more beautiful!
Bridge, Zhangjiagang City, Miao Chen Yuling fourth grade
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Yinzi Yan ------------ November 7, 2009 Author: ZOE Green
I have been to many places, such as Xiamen, Hangzhou, Hainan, Hong
Kong, etc., but my favorite place to take a few of Guilin Yinzi Yan.
Yin Ziyan Lipu County is located in Guilin Ma Zhen. Is divided into
the next hole, hall, on the hole in three parts. Cave gorgeous,
beautiful scenic spots, 20 multiple, unusual natural landscape be
regarded as gods, colorful, and image of the different columns of
stalactites, stone pagodas, Shiman, stone waterfall constitute the
worth of the world's artistic wonders of karst, is the world
reputation as "the world caverns wonders."
About Yinzi Yan, first presented in front of a 2 m high and 1 m
thick stalagmites, the shape of Lipu-taro, lifelike, so the United
States named "Lipu-taro King." Move forward a few steps, the real
magic kaleidoscope beauty began to emerge, form, color all sorts of
stalactites, such as cents like a god, it seems people like objects,
lifelike, so we are amazed.
I saw a Yinzi Yan Ruin known as the "Snow Fox", "music Shiping,"
"Jade Pool Wonderland", with Yin Ziyan Sambo known as the "Buddha on
the Classic," and "independence column Atlas," "mixed Yuan Zhen
Zhushan. " They are all separate King everywhere, seen from afar
they form a bizarre landscape of the world, without exception, is
imagination.
As the cave I keep moving forward, gold and silver base tower,
covered with four, multi-shaped scenery, varied and spectacular. Let
me cave far the most memorable scene is called "Four Generations
Living Together" and stalactites group. Was black, "ancestral
Grandpa" from us 100 million years, showing the orange "grandpa" 60
years ago, milky white "father" from the current 40 years, "son"
away from us there are 200,000 years. The cave for domestic rare. In
some areas such as the Dunhuang Grottoes, layer upon layer, bizarre,
as the fancy to imagine: In some areas, like pieces of a cloud-Jin,
is like a wonderful art gallery.
Yin Ziyan cave which dominate the landscape with its magnificent
scenery, on the outside Zeyi quiet tranquil natural scenery and the
known world. Yin Ziyan green mountains and rivers were charming,
beautiful and unforgettable.
Nanjing Road Primary School fourth-grade Langya ZOE Green
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Beautiful flowers ------------ November 6, 2009 Author: Lei Hang Mo
National Day to the Tiananmen Square before the flowers were
blossoming, and contests, and fragrant charm, then I'll talk about
the beautiful flowers and your bar!
Sunflower father nodded toward the sun, smiling, as if to say: "Sun
father, you look at me is pretty?"
Rose seemed to salute to the flag, singing the national anthem it!
Morning glory craned came to a branch next to the "episodes
answered, subtitle A," the birds waking dream of it! Aromatic
sweet-scented osmanthus, as if painted with a new French perfume it!
Chrysanthemum giving her his new hair, as if proudly: "I am the most
beautiful! I was the most beautiful!
Lotus insisted on a little green umbrella, as if to say: "I'm afraid
嗮 black, I'm afraid 嗮 black!"
The world has a wide variety of flowers, extremely beautiful, but
want you to carefully observe nature themselves.
Lishui City, Zhejiang
Province, Zhongshan, in the third grade Mo Lei Hang
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Beautiful campus ------------ November 4, 2009 Author: Anonymous
Our schools - Xianyou Experimental Primary School is one the best
schools in the county, located along the roadside in Xianyou Party
School Road.
The morning, stretching into the door, a beautiful and exquisite
statues greet our eyes, a man and a woman, woman holding a book, as
in telling us to study well and every day. Man's hand held hostage
football, seemed to us to be more movement, there must be robust
body. They erected in the garden, to become the campus a beautiful
landscape. Garden in front is a large playground, a playground there
are two large basketball courts, and outer circle of red, rich in
the flexibility of plastic runway, even if the fall had not hurt.
The number of the most beautiful around the playground to a large
banyan tree, which is like a mighty soldier guarding our campus. In
the summer, it was like a green velvet umbrella to cover the sun too
Yanyanshishi, people feel under the big banyan tree touch of cool,
it can do for us to shelter against the elements!
I love my school! I have to learn because it is a paradise!
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Field of small King ------------ November 4, 2009 Author: Anonymous
My hometown has a field, in autumn it is even more charming.
Blue sky rows of geese are flying south for fear of nipped at his
side. Pine, like soldiers in the same station
Straight, well they looked even more of a green. Trees do not know
that the barber give them a head dyed blond hair, is perhaps the
autumn invited to the bar girl. Trunk's eyes staring at kids, like
Changzhuoxuduo secretly laughing. Burst of autumn wind blowing into
their newly dyed hair and dumped down, like a butterfly fluttering
just long forest dance. Within a short while on the paved a golden
path. In this small way kids play in the play, some picking up
fallen leaves ready to take home to do a careful observation of
specimens; some take leaves to study its organs the various parts of
the name of ... ... the end of the fields is an orchard. Glowing red
apples are ripe, like a little child smile, bright purple grapes,
like glass beads one by one up ... ... I really want to bite a big
apple, eat the small bunch of grapes, if coupled with other However,
the fruit so much the better.哈哈! You see that a few children who are
under the pomegranate rack to help farmers uncle Zhai fruit
enlivened by a few even the dog bark is called a non-stop, as if to
say: "Zhai finished do not forget me ah, there is also my guards
credit for it. "
I love the home field, because it is a beautiful field, but also
harvest field.
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Rho-do-den-dron Garden ------------ November 4, 2009 Author:
Anonymous
If you ask me, in my summer vacation places to go where the most
fun? I would readily said: "The Rhododendron Garden of the most
fun."
Rhododendron Garden in Dayi County, where the pond edge, Yang Liu
Suifeng swaying, as if beckoning to us, the garden flowers contests,
and strange things, there are gorgeous peony, simple wild flowers,
the magic is really flowers are blooming daffodils ... , flowers
attract bees and butterflies is really a beautiful sight.
Azalea Park, not only to many plants, but animals are also very
interesting. Azalea garden birds flying in the air, chirped Jiao Wan
cried, as if singing a hymn; I went to the Azalea Garden Center
Garden, where there is a cow, I'll ask it "hello", it "moo moo "Let
the Liangsheng may retaliate to me, and I have no intention feet Yi
Shen, cow went so far as to lick my feet, probably agree with what I
mean. I feet an income, even back bull run, the original it is a
veritable "timid buffalo."
Azalea Park, not only the scenery lovely, the meals are delicious,
Pickle rabbit, boiled fish, spicy chicken ... ... memorable.
I asked about the management of his uncle, the original there is a
history here, in the past there are a lot of the cuckoo and azaleas,
and later because of catching the birds were very much, and
therefore the cuckoo flew away and never came back without the birds
have also been Azalea effects fade, so the business is not good, and
later repair of the Rhododendron Garden, hope that the Azalea
Rhododendron Flower Show will once again be open to come back.
Ah, an azalea garden is like a beautiful picture of you, ah! There
are crystal-clear streams, colorful flowers, there are numerous
friendly and loving people that have been very beautiful, but if
there are rhododendrons and the cuckoo to add luster the better.
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Home cloud ------------ November 4, 2009 Author: Lee Hui-xiang
My hometown has many beautiful places. A beautiful bridge, with a
beautiful garden, there are high mountains, there are clumsy and
strong trees, with an enviable mix of Nanliu river, and so ... ...
especially the fickle fog.
Cloud strange things. Mist-filled valley, it is like a winding
stream. Mist-block mountains, it was like a huge marquee.
Ever-changing clouds. In front of clouds, or a just a beautiful
little girl, an instant becomes a blossoming flower. Is obvious that
only a lamb, not wait for you look carefully, it becomes a thousand
miles in nine days to vent the Galaxy.
This is a cloud of strange things really blow people away.
Dabei third grade Yulin Li Hui-xiang
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Blue Sky ------------ November 3rd, 2009 Author: Anonymous
The sky is blue, because the universe is blue; the sea is blue,
because the sky is blue; my lamp is blue, because my heart is blue.
When buying stationery, blue priority; election results, the blue
than the indispensable; to buy clothes, blue blind. I seem to want
to create a genus with its own blue sky.
Blue represents the youth, I hope to always be full of vitality;
blue for happiness, I hope to ordinary happy life. In my eyes in my
heart, on behalf of all the good things in blue.
Perhaps, so I aspire to is not only the blue this color, but Napian
blue, the vast, boundless sky! I would like to turn into geese
flying Napian coveted sky; I would like to become a bird, singing in
the Feng ER, in the backdrop of white clouds, but why are dance,
free flight! Yes, really make me aspire to be Napian beautiful blue
sky!
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Community Garden ------------ November 3rd, 2009 Author: anonymous
A small garden is located in the center of our district, the elderly
and children exercise and play a good place to go. Garden flowers
and trees, small bridges, garden loft, fitness equipment.
Spring, the grass from the ground Tanchunaodai trees out of the new
branches grow verdant leaves, winter jasmine flowering early, and
had told us it was like to come in spring. Old men walking with a
puppy into the garden, the children Dangzhe swing, anglers leisurely
leaning against the fence. We all bathed in warm sunshine of spring.
The summer, trees verdant green onions Polygonum posumbu long, very
strong and long grass to see the last green one. The sun came out,
Qian Wanlv like a sharp sword of golden light, through the trees,
according to the grass. The lawn with a variety of wild flowers in
full bloom, red, white, yellow, purple, and pretty great. Sunset in
the red dragonflies shuttled back and forth from time to time in the
water lily, sometimes a little water on the water, water will be
leveling off from.
Autumn sky was clear of trees, leaves turn yellow. The green grass
has become a golden autumn Fengyi Chui, leaves fluttering in the air
and the ground is covered with another loose and soft leaves, like a
layer of thick carpet shop. Occasionally, I will do just picked up a
number of deciduous leaves sticker. In the garden in full bloom with
sweet-scented osmanthus, chrysanthemum, Fragrance Spreading
thousands of miles, competing for the Big Dipper-yan. . .
In winter, snow fluttering in the air and Sasa, bare branches on the
flooded with snow. Northwest winds kick into gear the blowing, I and
small partners in the snow snowball fights, snowman. Old people
handle arch sleeves, the stamped, said: "Snow Mega years, ah."
A small garden is beautiful throughout the year, and it accompanied
me to grow bit by bit happy memories of deeply branded in my mind,
it is difficult to erase.
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Makha Bucha Garden ------------ November 3rd, 2009 Author: anonymous
I love the motherland, Jiang Shan, but I love Ten Thousand Buddhas
home park.
Makha Bucha Park is located in the lush foothills. Came to the door,
saw two majestic pride of lions guard at the door on both sides of
the door floor of the Central Block, plum-shaped flower bed there.
Along the heights, there is a long corridor. Around the corridor on
each side of a pavilion, a pavilion by the eight gray columns
supports, pillars to the top painted paintings. At the top of the
pavilion is a yellow glass. Corridor column is red, and pole
painting, there are many sorts of old paintings, extremely
beautiful! I sat in the gallery, listening to the calls of birds
Jojo, trance back to the ancient rooms. Corridor side has a pool,
pool stands the seven swans, and some re-teach Little Swan fish, and
some in the combed their feathers, and some playing.
I love my hometown! Ten Thousand Buddhas also love the beautiful
garden!
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Campus flower beds ------------ November 3rd, 2009 Author: Anonymous
Our school have a flower bed, flower beds throughout the year as a
magician, and change come and go, each season has a different
picture, and now I will give you slowly introduce bar. Spring, the
flower bed inside opened a peach, this took special beautiful, like
a little girl, in the trees to show off a few of the beautiful self,
and its color is pink, it looks and posture together, they form a
wonderful pieces of Chinese Painting.
Summer school Round Gardenia Lane in full bloom, so that the whole
school change fragrance round our class the students often came to
cover the one belonging to several, because of the gardenia Huatai
Xiang.
Autumn, chrysanthemum flower in full bloom inside, some red, some
are ... ... they are in full bloom with can be beautiful, and
approached to see them, they seem to smile at you, to you, Xu Xu
whispering!
Winter flower bed inside the Huadu Xie, is not it did not take out?
Hey, is not, there are snowflakes.
Haha, our flower beds really beautiful ah!
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Deciduous ------------ November 2, 2009 Author: anonymous
Leaves falling from the tree can not retain, or the pursuit of the
wind.
The tree, your frustration, your obsession.
The wind, your dedication, your fascinating.
Leaves of the tree has brought to life, call made a green leaf, but
also gave the tree leaves fall.
The wind touched the leaves of thinking, let show the most
magnificent style, but also the end of the leaves fall wind.
Sun and moon wheel of reincarnation cycle, a rate blows but Qichu
leaves always seem to inevitably face the world map, decorated on
the vicissitudes little sign of gauze covered with layers of
melancholy, leaves so they solitary Gone ------
But why not retain the total tree leaf, the wind is also cruel to
abandon a leaf. The inability of the tree, or wind, cruel bear, only
the leaves know ------
Tell of the arrival of spring, leaves will be reappearing. From this
day begins, it will know its fate, the most bright moment lies in
the fall and fall, because that day, it has mountains oath sea grass
Union convention. They Meet in that dying season. They do nothing
for the elusive and Meet; them as a promise to the Meet; them as a
consonance similarities and Meet ------
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Zoo ------------ November 2, 2009 Author: Anonymous
Winter day, my mother and I went to the coveted Chongqing Zoo.
One into the zoo, I would hold the guide map, run around everywhere,
while the Lions went to visit a place, a moment where the tiger went
to visit my mother ... ... catch up with me, from me see for
yourself, my next to watch animals, I visited the pandas, elephants,
parrots, leopards, tigers, lions, monkeys, wolves ... ... and many,
many animals, pandas are lazy sleeping elephant is using a long
nose, roll up the grass taken his mouth to eat, parrots are flying
leopard walking in a cage, extremely powerful, very powerful lions
and tigers, lions shake the cage too, "Kuang Kuang 啦 pull" the sound
of a tiger running from time to time and roaring, the most
mischievous monkey on a number, and it jumped about the East, West
jump about, extremely mischievous, wolves are also lazy, sleep on
the floor do not rise up. I remember to see a zebra, I also nearly
lost her way, thanks to the way I remember right turns where there
was a "magic strange world," or I'll get lost, really scare.
Left the zoo, I was already exhausted, but I am very happy because I
saw a lot seen on television, but not seen in real life animals, In
addition, I am also thinking to go look at the wildlife park.
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Where is the spring ------------ November 2, 2009 Author: Anonymous
"Where is the spring ah, spring, where" On we are singing this song
for the spring. Spring like a naughty child, secretly put our hats,
gloves, hid, and our thick cotton-padded jacket to the detached.
Spring like a competent tailor, to the grass in a dazzling weave
sweater, to peach made of pink princess dress. Spring still seems
like an excellent director, performing a scene of birds singing,
spring accompaniment, butterfly dancers, "Chun Zhisheng."
Oh, found, found the spring had at our side, hand in hand with us
are doing the game.
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Beautiful home ------------ November 1, 2009 Author: anonymous
Let me tell you a beautiful place, it is rural, it is my home.
Look! This Lvyin Yin grass spots in full bloom the flowers, mixed in
the bushes like the eyes, like stars, micro Fengyi Chui, but also
kept twinkling with a fragrance Unit soak into the depths of the
heart. Liner off the flowers of the grass to increase the vitality
of spring. Whether in the poor soil, or the mountains, crevice,
there are to see it green shadow.
Summer looks to be the most lush part of the trees of the! That a
millennium tree; a pine tree; a lychee trees ... ... may be the
strongest to the number of willows in! Hot weather, home where other
trees have been roasted Wanle Yao, but only the willow trees at the
breast. She braved the scorching sun, let us play under the shade of
a tree playing, reading, painting ... ...
Autumn has come, the fruit orchard are also cooked in! From a
distance, wow! Very big one ah pear Lin! Pear son like 1000 bells in
shake, this pear heads large, thin, Roucui, juicy, sweet and very
tired of people! It makes saliva flow down 3000 feet! Golden banana
from the Office of land stuck in the yard a good head, and looked,
to pry into the lives of tourists. Curved banana boat really like
the curved, like the curved sickle, but also as the winding
Crescent.
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The beautiful botanical gardens ------------ November 1, 2009
Author: anonymous
Dawn slowly opened the curtain of the night, but also a martyrdom
Korea morning, has brought fresh to the campus.
Upon entering campus, clean air face descend quickly that people
remember with affection from a comfortable, carefree feeling.
Playground on the edge of the Botanical Garden, flowers everywhere,
and it could be said fruit is in abundance. A lot of trees were
planted on the lawn, there are mango trees, Yang peach, banana, Tit
Shu, Yung Shue. These trees, it seems that every piece of greenery
all have a new life in the quiver. Each tree was so tall and
straight, like a mighty brave a warrior guarding the palace-like.
Botanical Garden, there is also a small pond, which long with lotus.
This reminds me of a saying: the mud instead of dye, Zhuo-Qing Lian
instead of demons. To put it very yes. Although the lotus growing in
the sludge between the sewage is not able to keep clean; while being
washed in clean water, but the natural grace and not look seductive.
Dark green, like a lotus leaf stays on the water, Xiao San, the top
covered with crystal drops. In that set off a lotus leaf, the dew of
Jiduo lotus, and some white jade, and some powder Ruxia. Qian Chen
is not a dyed White Lotus, from the water fall in. out, like a white
girl, shy to lie at Bristol branch Cuiye with waves of water into
the shadow of the Inter. What a beautiful looking people are also
reluctant afternoon a memorable one.
In this lovely botanical garden, the everywhere into the filled with
our laughter, make us more like the beautiful and lovely botanical
garden.
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Huan Huaxi ------------ November 1, 2009 Author: anonymous
A sky clear, sunny morning, we are following with a happy mood,
strode briskly went to Chengdu, "Huan Huaxi" play.
Entering the gate, we saw something like a telescope frame to the
pole, the pole on both sides of the words "a dollar to see
three-dimensional film," I'd like to look, would perhaps come up
with two mothers one dollar coins, I have one, Jin-Jin 1. We were
reading the "Gulf war", "Great Wall" is really three-dimensional!
We walk in the "Poetry Road" on both sides of the middle carved with
ancient and modern well-known poet, for example are: "not the wild
fire in spring health." "On the black Yan Fei Gao, Chanyu night
Duntao." ... ...
My Mom gave me 5 dollars and bought two bags of fish food, and I
take a bag of the Jin-Jin, sitting behind the bamboo fence on a
small stool. Wow! Real fish in the water more than ah, at least
several hundred, with red, white, black, a variety of carp. We can
not wait for the 10 How many pieces of fish I would eat out,
sprinkle on the water, their mouth a carp together a scramble of
would like to eat some food. A large body of black carp swim over,
put the rest of Zuiyi Zhang How many pieces of fish food to sucked
into the maw-ri!
We reached a lake. The level of the lake as a mirror, sparkling lake
reflected upside out of the blue sky, white clouds. It is like a
shiny pearl inlaid in the mountains, the big middle, this time,
burst of wind came, the lake Dangqi a ripple, like a blooming
flower, I really like a beautiful landscape painting!
We ate lunch, went to Du Fu's Thatched Cottage. Inside, we came to
love the Department of thatched cottage, which has many pictures of
information literature. Then we came to the 'Daya Hall', Daya hall
door, there is a bronze statue of Du Fu's done. We entered the hall
inside Taya has many bronze and white marble statue of the poet to
do, there is Li Bai, Lu, Bai Ju-yi. . . . . . They posture vary,
some lying on the seat, in some cases put my beard ... ...
Next, we went to the thatched cottage sites, into the door, you will
see a concave fence down the middle ground, the ground there are a
lot of jars, cans. Excavated ruins on display a lot of things out,
there are ears cans, four ear cans, ceramic beads, pieces top .... .
There followed three imitation of ancient dress, there are odalisque
wear, there is the emperor wearing the Queen, there are soldiers and
civilians to wear, have done very delicate, very pretty.
We went to a bonsai garden, which has many flowers, tulip red, there
are yellow. Plum with pink and white, there are elegant fragrance
smell.
Finally, relying on ticket to pick up the two shiny gold coins Du Fu
Thatched Cottage.
This fun, let me know a lot of knowledge, such as: know that the
great poet Du Fu, Li Bai is Shixian ... ...
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The park in the springtime ------------ November 1, 2009 Author:
anonymous
In the cold winter, people are looking forward to the warm spring.
Unconsciously, Spring girl strode light footsteps came. She used
magic, the mountains become more beautiful, the campus has become
more warm, the trees become more green. Look at the spring girl came
to East Lake Park, the park of her footprints everywhere, she
becomes more beautiful East Lake Park.
Spring girl let the green grass poking from the ground. East Lake
Park, the lawn really green ah, green was as if it were a shiny
green stones; East Lake Park, the lawn really soft ah, like a soft
green carpet; East Lake Park, the lawn really big ah, to the former
looked to see is a green.
People on the wide lawn in some cases is happily flying kites, and
some seriously in reading, and some in the relish eating snacks, and
some pleasant lying on the lawn to sleep. From time to time there
are some lovely birds on the lawn, "twitter" and cried, some
mischievous little bird is still playing roughhouse it!
Chun-old girl leaves of the trees knocked to the ground, so that new
shoots sprouting. East Lake Park, the tree really Tsui ah, each leaf
like a green gem, they were lovely green, green was dazzling and
shimmering turquoise. Walking in the middle of two rows of trees,
feeling as if into a green world.
I have seen the magnificent sea, enjoying the excessive levels of
the monthly Town Lake as a mirror, but never seen such a reservoir
of water. Reservoir of water really clear ah, the Qing, you could
see small fish swimming in the water; Reservoir, River really long
ah, like a queue winds in the middle of the mountains; reservoir
water really green ah, as if no time is a piece of jade.
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Beautiful Qingcheng
------------ November 1, 2009 Author: anonymous
Shenzhen Xin Zhang on 402 Homestead Primary School Teacher: Xiong
You-Ping
Summer, I told my father the company along with several aunts and
uncles went to Chengdu, a well-known Chinese and foreign well-known
tourist destination - Qingcheng Mountain.
That afternoon, we drove to the Mount Qingcheng. The car, gate
engraved the "Qingcheng secluded world," India into the eyes of
several characters at once. Through the gate, you can see a seat
covered with green trees of the mountains, a vague mildly birds can
also be heard the sound of the birds singing to Qingcheng background
were extremely mysterious, seemed to be waiting for us to visit.
We entered the gate, along the wet tree-lined path to move forward,
while walking to enjoy the beautiful scenery: the left path is the
high mountain slopes of the right side of the Yi Keke long green
trees tall and straight, each trees are so high, then the green.
Walked, we went to the lake on the city. On Town Lake is located in
between the mountains, is a quiet and charming lake, clear bottoming
out, level as a mirror. We boarded a ship ready to go to the other
side. Ship slowly moving in calm water, I suddenly feel this lake is
like a bowl full of crystal, jumping waves like a one crystal,
shining in the sunlight sparkled.
After disembarking, we walked 10 minutes, they came to the cableway
station. Listen to tour guide said that the rope more than 900
meters long, to sit 15 minutes before end. We sat rope, and slowly
rose up the. I looked down and saw the foot of the slope was covered
with a clusters of purple wildflowers, like 10 million butterflies,
live in the green grass. A gust of wind blowing, "Purple Butterfly"
flap the wings, danced a beautiful dance ... ... rope rose higher,
Qingcheng panoramic view of mountain scenery: pine trees with
cypress hill and dale, forest wings flying birds, grass brightly
colored flowers, the clear valley streams ... ... I felt I was not
in the tramway, but in the painting of the.
Down the rope, and we also went to visit the Green Palace, mandarin
duck wells, Laojun Court, shengdeng Pavilion, 9 Shui ... ... people
everywhere are so yearn. Tour guide said that there are many holes
Qingchengshan have Zhaoyang Dong, Fearless hole, Yee Lok Wo ... ...
Unfortunately, our time is limited and can not play 11.
Coming down the mountain, I once again saw that the five characters
on the gate, you can not help secretly praise: "Qingcheng secluded
world is indeed well-deserved reputation 呀!"
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Color of the Village ------------ October 31, 2009 Author: anonymous
Car came to a mountain village where the world is really colorful
and ah!
In the gray morning mist, a group of white gosling came to a small
river, one a thump, thump of jumped River, in the river swimming. A
group of yellow chicks come to a small river that a lawn, happily
catching insects. Farmers have long down the field, their backs and
that bronze, dolphin beads of sweat glistening like pearls, like a
string to drip down, fell on fertile black soil, the seedlings would
wave that Yi Keke a small head of green. Glistening yellow pears
heavy ground covered with branches, the tree to their knees. A
string of Muscatel grapes of water Lingling hiding under the large
green leaves, and looked curiously the outside world.
At noon, the sun shining on the earth burning. A small black dog
barking outstretched tongue and ran back home. Hua Mao is also a
small jump up and down the hiding quietly under the melon vines.
Gray black sparrow no longer call and they flee back to the woods,
and flew to the branches of sweet went to sleep. Little face by the
sun tan pink lotus, and some hiding in the cool shade of the lotus
leaf, lotus leaf and some opened and looked around. Only that I do
not know tired of the cicada is still a long cicada cicada kept
short shouted.
Afternoon, the Little White Bleater's cried, skipping out of the
house who go there to eat the green mountain broken fresh grass.
Cowboy wearing a yellow straw hat, riding on the brown cattle back,
blowing piccolo on the hill. That big yellow pumpkins lying on the
grass was a leisurely, then the green sponge gourd, bitter gourd
white shelves again in Guatemala Dangzhe swing Xiude flowers have
opened and closed his horns.
As the sun sets, each of which plants are covered with golden Shayi.
From afar, a glittering. The villagers newly constructed buildings,
but also reflecting the red, yellow light. A breeze blowing,
Hawthorn Lane formed the layers of green waves. Red, yellow, blue
dragonflies, like little Pac Man-like fly in the air with light.
Evening, little star who jumped out of a black backdrop, jade plate
like the moon had risen to the night sky. Old children sitting in
the large trees enjoy the cool air in 3322, again about that
circulated through the ages the story of Cowherd and Weaver.
Beautiful and fertile mountain village, you will usher in another
golden autumn!
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Snow ------------ October 31, 2009 Author: anonymous
I liked one little snow, because snow is so white and beautiful.
Morning, I would get up at 6:30, because the outside is very bright.
I pulled curtains, ah! The white sea. The ground, the trees, the
roof was covered with snow jade in general. Looked up, silver sky,
white, the vast one. Overnight how the whole world into a snow
paradise?
I am going to school book bag and had no idea that there have been
children in the snow, snowman, snowball fight, and laughter
everywhere. Began to snow, and flying snow, like catkins, like
dandelion, Da Zhezhuan children falling down. Although the weather
was very cold, the ground is very slippery, but people seem to
forget the cold, his face with a smile, because they like me very
much like snow days.
Man said: "Snow Mega years." Pests in winter snow will freeze to
death next year, again usher in a harvest.
I quickly stepped up the pace, went to school, foot rustling sound
in the snow, the snow and I seemed to whisper: "go and school
snowman bar!"
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Watching the Snow ------------ October 31, 2009 Author: anonymous
Chinese New Year back home I was asleep, was awakened by his
sister's cries. The quilt Yixian, wear clothes, jumped up. The
curtains Yi Liao, "ah, good heavy snow!" I was the first time I saw
under the snow, I innocently shocked by.
Filled the air of the Pac-white jade, white and very charming. She
playfully turn, but politely to dance; she gently float, but are
free to fly!
Even days, the ground groaning. In this wider stage, the wind
blowing snow. Feng ER blow to the left, a few snowflakes turn left;
wind blowing to the right, a few snowflakes floating on the right.
Naughty teasing teasing the wind like snowflakes on a moment left,
while another to the right; snowflake children will be followed by
Feng ER Fly Fly! Snow flying tired, they stopped. Fell on the
fields, sleeping seedlings to the fields covered with a thick layer
of blankets; falls on the roof, the roof is not silent infants; fall
leaves, leaves play a trembling infants; falls on my little face ,
ice cool in; fell on my little mouth, sweet Zizi's.
Looked up, and the mountains, trees, the leaves, shining white,
silver shiny one; What a Wonderful Time I Spent a tree wrapped in
the world ah! Farmers uncle said: This year is a harvest. Yes ah,
"Winter cover a blanket in the coming year looked on steamed bun
sleep."
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My hometown ------------ October 31, 2009 Author: Su Rui
Construction of water is a good place for tourism. It is where the
specialties are tofu and some delicious fruit. The most famous is
the construction of water, East Gate, which is used to fight a long
time ago when using the past to fight if the enemy came in, they
will all hide in that Gate. That if someone to travel east gate,
they would enthusiastically take tourists go there to take
photographs. It is where there is a street, street paved road with
quartzite, those shops and food stores are doing with the wood Muban
Fang, very pretty.
Construction of water the streets there are a lot of tasty and
good-looking clothes. Each of its one street has a pleasant name, is
also useful characteristics. Even a small hospital of their many
people is also very characteristic Oh! They have a street is
designed to buy nice clothes and shoes are very cheap sheets Oh!
Built on the square of water sold a lot of small toys and yo-yo.
There are grandfather and grandmother who practiced tai chi in the
square it! I do not know how the spirit, just like before, like how
beautiful 3-year-old ah! Square, right next to a gold and silver
bracelets specializing in selling it, there are a lot of old ladies
and some young people to buy, how much business is good. There are
people who are selling birds on the square it, where there is a
water jar.
Oh, they are good law and order! Because there are very conscious.
They never an accident while driving, their humility with each
other, exist in harmony.
If we have time, we must come to my home - this great city for
sightseeing Oh!
Yunjinghong Primary school grade 4 Su Rui
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Campus green ------------ October 31, 2009 Author: anonymous Source:
Internet Source
Our school is a green school in Chongqing, there are many flowers
and trees are our favorite green friend.
Let us talk about fake tree Ficus virens landscape pool bar, how
much it's tall, imposing, like mighty sentinels on campus, as usher
in a new century, a small ant to the Ficus virens up study is that
it leaves the book, if the osmium in on " Kenshu Ben ", eating
leaves, knowledge of the mind in it.
There Magnolia campus, leaves large, petal white jade. The sign that
it is a dicotyledonous plant, belonging to Magnoliaceae; Lamei grown
very lush, it only opens in winter, Fragrance Spreading Barry, a
tree yellow flowers were very beautiful. Why does it before opening
it in winter? This problem when I did not understand and later
learned that each plant has its own growth pattern. Chinensis, and
the spirit of winter, we should learn Dudou.
Camellia is also very beautiful, bright red, the flowers very large.
Summer night, firefly dance in the above reflected on the camellia's
face, how beautiful 呀!
Our campus has so many green friends, really good-looking! Please
come to our guests, please?
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