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Winter day, my mother and I went to the coveted Chongqing Zoo.

One into the zoo, I would hold the guide map, run around everywhere, while the Lions went to visit a place, a moment where the tiger went to visit my mother ... ... catch up with me, from me see for yourself, my next to watch animals, I visited the pandas, elephants, parrots, leopards, tigers, lions, monkeys, wolves ... ... and many, many animals, pandas are lazy sleeping elephant is using a long nose, roll up the grass taken his mouth to eat, parrots are flying leopard walking in a cage, extremely powerful, very powerful lions and tigers, lions shake the cage too, "Kuang Kuang 啦 pull" the sound of a tiger running from time to time and roaring, the most mischievous monkey on a number, and it jumped about the East, West jump about, extremely mischievous, wolves are also lazy, sleep on the floor do not rise up. I remember to see a zebra, I also nearly lost her way, thanks to the way I remember right turns where there was a "magic strange world," or I'll get lost, really scare 啦.

Left the zoo, I was already exhausted, but I am very happy because I saw a lot seen on television, but not seen in real life animals, In addition, I am also thinking to go look at the wildlife park.
 

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The Snow

A Saturday morning, I also doing Sweet dreams, my mother said loudly: "snow 啦 'snow 啦!" I have awakened from a dream, Quickstep went to the window to see snow. Snow Fairy planted like a flower, a gust of wind blowing, they dance. As if the earth covered with a layer of snow-white blankets. Flowers put on a beautiful bow, very beautiful. Layers of snow to pile up, less than half an hour, our world has become too busy in the white.

Wow, so beautiful, I can not help but play downstairs, and her mother with the down. Snowball fights with my mom and I saw a snowball flying, and I swiftly out of the way, Snowball from the right flew past. I told my mother threw a ball, too late to dodge her mother, was I hit, my mother and I happily jumped ah Tiaoa.

I really hope that Ryan to take annual snow!
 

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Our beautiful school

I Xiangxiang Dongfanghong school, which is the modern technology and Experimental Primary School in Hunan Province is the only model primary school Xiangxiang.

Every morning, a team of Young Pioneers ceremonial team at the school gate to greet the arrival of the teachers and fellow students, went outside the gymnastics floor, we can see the solemn national flag Taiwan, wide blue stadium and ring the runway.
Flag of Taiwan both sides of the kinds of the London plane trees, its tall Tingbo, like grasslands, like sentinels guarding my school.

Take a few steps on to the floor inside the parade. Within the parade square feet on the right is a three-storey school building. The left is a four-story classroom building. I left the fourth layer of the first 164 classes to learn.

Each classroom is very spacious, very bright. A classroom with 80 people in class. Each year there are more than 250. Trapezoidal back Nadong multimedia classrooms, computer rooms, as well as laboratories.

Multimedia trapezoidal classroom can be opened with the parent-teacher associations and so on. Computer room can play to many games and learn a lot of knowledge, every Wednesday, we have 164 students in classes that would go on the computer lessons.

Lab allows us to do a lot of fun experiment. Can also learn a lot on the outside not learn knowledge.
I love the East Is Red School.
 

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Guide Words

My name is Han, Ye Nago, Christina 9-year-old Korean tour guide told me everyone on the list,

Today it was taken up by South Korea, I guided you to visit our beautiful campus Bureau of the small, please lot of guidance, lot of guidance, first of all, let's Middle School is located in the ancient city into the gate, you will see is a beautiful little garden , which has a quite powerful and the rockery stands in a small pond where, sometimes, the water is also a vague can see a few nice fish, and then you will see the South Academic Building, which is the teacher's place of work, then it , you will see the old school buildings, which are pre-school children in grade school children and a place, and I grade on a time and pre-school is the last time, the place is a flag had to rely on Taiwan, and the school between the profiles, which are three good students and civilization, written by the students inside the school profile, than I say good many more.

A powerful new teaching building, which is the uncle of workers in 2004 spent five days and five nights built. Listen to our teacher says that this teaching has spent seven million full floor! ! ! Remember the class unanimously, no, almost the same time, exclaimed: "wow!!!" This prestigious teaching building of the jacket it is composed of red lines and white lines, which a total of six stories to the fifth floor is a classroom. When the time comes, you must ask me: "That's what the sixth floor of miles?" I tell you! The sixth floor is the conference room! Stupid.

Our school a good bar! We welcome you to visit the school at any time! See you soon!
 

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Fa Yuen

Lingyun into the cell door to see is a beautiful garden.

Spring, spring girls marched to the pace of light earth. Grass quietly stuck your head out from the ground, its like the ingenuity of textile experts, with their own bits and pieces of green, relying on the collective strength, woven into a block Lvyin Yin carpets. There are trees at the Garden, only flowering peach trees, open flowers and more numerous, you see, the squid are bending the. Bees flying, flying around the flowers, like to see which duo pollen on the flowers do! Warbler see this beautiful scene of the sing not help sounding song.

Aunt summer comes, the garden fountain opened, they sprayed some outward, like a big white chrysanthemums, as well as the spray of a high high, like a fireworks display on the water. At this time, the elderly and children enjoy the cool in here.

Granny autumn came, this time, like a green carpet embroidered on the yellow Phnom Penh. Persimmon tree leaves turn red, and a gentle breeze, leaves a swaying, as if a troupe of burning flame. Poplar leaves seems to be to leave her mother's arms, are reluctant to part with. Red string to open a more beautiful, and a string of a string, and some, like the candied fruit, some crackers, like a hanging peg.

Grandpa came to the winter, and it gives the grass covered with a thick layer of blankets, a tree wearing a white cotton-padded clothes. A white garden.

We plant an attractive garden year round view, gave rise to a good enjoyment.
 

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Morning River

Morning, the Riverside is full of milky white fog, people outside have become vague five-step, 10-step people outside can not see, the whole riverside like a dream-like wonderland.

Slowly the sun rises from the east, fog gradually dispersed to the riverside to those who exercise more and much more attractive! Some of them dancing, some in the running, as well as in playing badminton. . . . . .

Solar radio in riverside grass, grass they woke up from a dream, and stretching for the sun father said: "Good morning sun, father." Surface of the sun hitting the river, the river sparkling, flashing colorful golden. As if to say: "Sun father

Good morning. "According to the Sun father in the woods, the birds twitter to call non-stop, they seem to each other a good morning Road.

Riverside morning how beautiful ah! Because it gave rise to a lot of fun.
 

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You C.kawakamii Park

Today, my mother took me to swim C.kawakamii Park, I am extremely happy.  C.kawakamii Forest Park is really a beautiful scenery!  A door, the immediate extraordinary scenery makes you sigh, which Zuozuo high peaks, piles of "fake tree stumps," arranged in the above, like the rows of the ladder. You along the "ladder" up, we will find a variety of features, such as the mangrove red flowers, red mushrooms exist side by side booths, as well as lush trees that Yi Keke!

The more you look inside to go the more exotic scenery. See, that interesting, "and five women, birthday celebration," is a five trees in the front of the tree bends over the waist, looks really like the tree to the tree, "birthday celebration" can be a funny. Then there is "impressive" and "Eternal Love" is a two tightly embrace the trees, it seems that this life do not want to separated; Then there is convulsed by the "look-fu tree" life-like Kuan Kung beard ... ...

Friends, this C.kawakamii Forest Park was so fun, when you and your friends to look at this unique landscape viewing the bar!
 

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I love my hometown

My home is a "lotus surrounded on three sides, Liu, agenda mountains semi-Town Lake," the city. It has seventy-two names spring, one of the most famous is the Baotu Spring.

Baotu Spring is a symbol of Jinan, it is the middle of three shares of water, each like a naughty doll up after competing terror drill, a more than a high, the highest there is a foot high, waves out of stocks as white as snow, and soon disappeared on the whole taxes. Here in spring, green, green, is like a translucent crystal jade. Water clarity bottoming out, which there are many good-looking fish, and some visitors to them eating the food, and some in the grass to fall in. to drill, and some chasing each other, as well as in the upstream, the fish is simply their paradise.

To see such a beauty, not only reminiscent of an "East origin, A World Without Water, flat white okho gush," poem. According to legend, Emperor Qianlong to Jinan, the water tasted Baotu Spring, the wind it the "best in the world stream."

You see, my home how wonderful spring! I love my hometown.
 

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Fall  Autumn


I lived in a large central lawn, I looked out the window every day Napian beautiful lawn, on the ground and my favorite of the daisy.

Autumn arrived, it began a Choice, I saw the autumn to the field wearing a golden dress, leaves are yellow, the tree covered with fruit, you see, there are persimmon, apple, pear autumn to the large area to the golden yellow, golden yellow earth become the world! What a beautiful field, what a lovely lawn, how beautiful nature! We must treasure the beauty of nature!

Sundays are busy every household received mature fruit! I saw the grass there is also my favorite of the chrysanthemum, therefore, more beautiful chrysanthemums ah! I wish I brought home a bunch of plug Zhai vase my home, I was going to reach out Quzhai However, the hand again shrink back, thinking; if I Quzhai, then it undermines the beauty of nature! I have decided not picked, I think; I come here every day to look the same can not enjoy the beauty of the chrysanthemum do?

I love the beauty of autumn, we love the beautiful chrysanthemum, a deeper love for the beauties of nature! I also hope that every day, fall! Every day, day of harvest.

Mulberry Township Central Primary School fourth-grade class of Wei Jia-Yin
 

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Autumn outing Jilin Earth

October day, my mother go to Jilin things, just me to rest, so fortunate to go together with the mother. Along the way the scenery outside the window like the one the picture, from my eyes by.

Autumn field really America ah!

Is the first time I saw that golden rice. A gust of wind blowing, the wind dancing golden rice golden, like a golden sea, a wave pushed a wave, very spectacular, it full of rice grain to show off the fruits of their own.

You see, there are a golden corn piles of gold, like a seat Jinshan. Raising black and red sorghum red red face like a bit farmer uncle happy faces.

Vegetable garden, the waist-high in soy, black Litou yellow, pods are two-inch long foot. Open the pod, collections of beans shining with golden light, like a few small baby is asleep. The distance to see Yi Keke cabbage, and bundles of green onions ... ...

Into the field to see the beautiful uncle were farmers. Although they found sweating can be very happy heart, because the dealer had a good harvest. Farmers uncle's efforts have not been in vain, ushered in the fruit harvest hill and dale. Without the hard work the farmers there is no uncle of our affluence. Farmers to use their hands as brushes, to the earth as the paper, creating a picturesque beauty of picture.

Which white patches of red, yellow, green fields, constitute a beautiful picture of autumn.

Northeast Normal University 2nd Primary four-year Palace Si-yu
 

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Charming Binjiang Road

Wanzhou District Binjiang Road is a beautiful scenic spots.

Today, I play, and his father to the Riverside Road. When we looked around to the left, the Yangtze River as a giant mirror. Riverside ship at anchor, waiting for the passenger's travel passenger, large cargo ships ... ... Bridge across the Yangtze River at the river surface, like a rainbow from heaven. Mercedes-Benz and had a spaceship, like the rocket upside-Benz in the river surface. In front of some fitness equipment, where many people exercise, there are adults, the elderly, as well as children, he (she) had some of the badminton; some playing tennis; there's playing table tennis. In my right is the wide roads, street car steady stream. Horse side of the road one block high-rise buildings. In the Riverside roadside stands a uniquely shaped building - the Three Gorges Star Stadium, it looked like an alien coming from a flying saucer, it all themselves.

Night, Binjiang Road, more beautiful. As night fell, when Binjiang Road, became the light of the sea. The river sparkling lights, like the colorful fireworks, floating down the earth. On the road a string of bright lights, as the shining river, endless torrents. Rainbow lights dazzling high-rise buildings, warm welcome to visitors from continental seas.

Binjiang Road is a bright pearl in Wanzhou.

Chongqing Wanzhou Telegraph Road Primary School third-grade Dunn Tao
 

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Autumn Field

Autumn quietly came, she was wearing fall clothing, with the joy of harvest. Than the spring, summer, winter, bright, and more attractive.

Autumn, the fields, then golden ears of rice, put on an autumn girl brought Autumn, head studded with golden beads, smile and laugh to see Napian rice Wanle Yao, breeze rice fields, filled with waves of golden waves, people revel in which intoxicated with this piece of beauty in the golden rice fields.

Well, Chinese parasol tree leaves, a one to settle down again, they seem to be to that of a golden-yellow "butterfly" dance in the fall ... ... in the number of roadside ginkgo, the hanging one to a small fan, burst of autumn breezes rustle, as if this charming little gingko fans gave the roadside are busy people, while, more leaves fall on the ground, like a gorgeous golden yellow blanket child.

Rice fields that edge into the grass until the fall of that moment, while the vibrant grass had been changed, it was too cold fear that the fall in the face of autumn days, the advent of grass began to wither, and it's looking is also slowly dim, it is to leave the cold of autumn, it is to hide the depths, they are

Enjoy the beauty of autumn in your time, I would very much still is so heroic glow, but the fate of the case, they only temporarily and to say goodbye to the autumn. To tell you: It is not the spring is beautiful, with life and hope in fact fall more exciting, it brings to people the joy of harvest.

Ah, autumn fields more beautiful!

Bridge, Zhangjiagang City, Miao Chen Yuling fourth grade
 

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Yin Ziyan

I have been to many places, such as Xiamen, Hangzhou, Hainan, Hong Kong, etc., but my favorite place to take a few of Guilin Yinzi Yan.

Yin Ziyan Lipu County is located in Guilin Ma Zhen. Is divided into the next hole, hall, on the hole in three parts. Cave gorgeous, beautiful scenic spots, 20 multiple, unusual natural landscape be regarded as gods, colorful, and image of the different columns of stalactites, stone pagodas, Shiman, stone waterfall constitute the worth of the world's artistic wonders of karst, is the world reputation as "the world caverns wonders."

About Yinzi Yan, first presented in front of a 2 m high and 1 m thick stalagmites, the shape of Lipu-taro, lifelike, so the United States named "Lipu-taro King." Move forward a few steps, the real magic kaleidoscope beauty began to emerge, form, color all sorts of stalactites, such as cents like a god, it seems people like objects, lifelike, so we are amazed.

I saw a Yinzi Yan Ruin known as the "Snow Fox", "music Shiping," "Jade Pool Wonderland", with Yin Ziyan Sambo known as the "Buddha on the Classic," and "independence column Atlas," "mixed Yuan Zhen Zhushan. " They are all separate King everywhere, seen from afar they form a bizarre landscape of the world, without exception, is imagination.

As the cave I keep moving forward, gold and silver base tower, covered with four, multi-shaped scenery, varied and spectacular. Let me cave far the most memorable scene is called "Four Generations Living Together" and stalactites group. Was black, "ancestral Grandpa" from us 100 million years, showing the orange "grandpa" 60 years ago, milky white "father" from the current 40 years, "son" away from us there are 200,000 years. The cave for domestic rare. In some areas such as the Dunhuang Grottoes, layer upon layer, bizarre, as the fancy to imagine: In some areas, like pieces of a cloud-Jin, is like a wonderful art gallery.

Yin Ziyan cave which dominate the landscape with its magnificent scenery, on the outside Zeyi quiet tranquil natural scenery and the known world. Yin Ziyan green mountains and rivers were charming, beautiful and unforgettable.

Nanjing Road Primary School fourth-grade Langya ZOE Green
 

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You tongjingzhen Spa

I have heard very good tongjingzhen spa, plus I did not soak in the hot springs, so I wanted to go to tongjingzhen travel. Today, the opportunity comes, we Starts! Curved road is not a 240-degree turn, that is, a continuous "S"-shaped curve. Some sat more than 80 minutes by car, we came surrounded by mountains, beautiful mountains, fine spring scenic tongjingzhen Scenic Area.

I can not wait to jump off the motorcycle. "Ah! What a breath of fresh air 呀! What a lush green forest ah!" I gasped in admiration.

Start a hot spring. Hot spring pool of water emitting a thick sulfur smell and touch of water vapor, I have learned from the data: tongjingzhen hot springs contain a large number of calcium sulfate, can treat many illnesses, the water temperature year round maintained at 30 - 50 ℃, up to 62 ℃. We are playing in a spa where the Shui Zhang, You have to be happy. We swim for a long time, his stomach is hungry, we eat together. Food is very fragrant, very good to eat, we eat very full, pretty soon, into a "round pig" of the.

We also toured the monkey hole. Finally, we came to tongjingzhen bungee jumping, high jumping and that was like a stage for the brave, I really wanted to experience the taste of bungee jumping, unfortunately did not at least 13 years of age can not bungee jump. I secretly determined in his heart: In my 18 years of age must go before a bungee jump.

The afternoon, we reluctantly and scenic beauty tongjingzhen goodbye. I want to come here, to fulfill my dream of bungee jumping.
 

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Harbin, Travels

Harbin, Travels

Harbin, Heilongjiang Province, the administrative center, there is Sun Island, Zhaolin Park, 东北虎林园, waiting for the name ski attractions. Fourth day the first month of 2004, mother, auntie, sister and I flew to Harbin, Chengdu. We sat for three and a half hours the aircraft has finally come to the long-awaited Harbin. We are playing a taxi to the hotel we stayed - Jin Gu Hotel.

The afternoon, we first went to the "Ice and Snow World", where we slippery ice and snow slides, extremely fun! Into the "Ice and Snow World" It's like walking into a colorful dream. The next morning we went to the "东北虎林园" 东北虎林园 located in the Songhua River north bank, where domesticated a variety of different ages more than 200 purebred Siberian tiger, of which the world's rarest animals, white tiger 6 only, Liger animals 2, 30 African lions, three black tiger, white lion 2. We also looked at Tiger feeding show: a live cows were staff from the carriage fell out of a dozen Tiger threw himself at once to go the moment the poor cow was torn to pieces by a tiger, too horrible! That afternoon, we came to the "Sun Island." Sun Island is a very beautiful place, here was held to "urban Xue Xiang, Xue Su spectacle" as the theme of the international snow sculpture festival. Sun Island at the entrance and people we play squirrels, Chu Pa-chieh, giant panda shake hands with each other 祝新年快乐! Sister said: "They looked cute yo!" "Yes, I like them!" I said. We have snowball fights on the Sun Island, slip slide, sliding pulleys, horse riding, played with it may be happy to be happy! The evening, we went to Zhaolin Park, where we saw the various countries from around the country artists who carved colorful Ice, but also according to a lot of like. The next morning we went Chilezaocan Erlongshan International Ski Resort. Sister to play do not come to ski on the pulley to play, and I rented a snow tools, under the guidance of the coach I am interested in full to learn to ski, the coach said: "can not just stare at his own foot to see, to look at the front feet into the down eight characters, skateboards can not cross. "This is my second time to ski, so I learned quickly about an hour later, I can own a man skiing. The fourth day morning we went to the Harbin Architecture Museum of Art, it looks like a very big palace, which are very valuable collection of things, there is Harbin's history in photographs, it let us know the city of Harbin the development process. That afternoon, we came to the sports skating rink, there are a lot of people skating. Here was not a smooth skating, but as a real natural skating rink. Since I will not use skate shoes, so I and my sister in a nearby small slide playing.

After four days of fun, I increased insight, With that happy back in Luzhou.
 

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On the morning of Lake Park

Lake Park, the morning is a wake-up flowers and trees and opening up.

Lake Park, the morning was beautiful. Waking the grass just on top of crystal with a subtitle of the dew, not like the translucent crystal pearl? That big tree trunk straight, seemed to be especially mentally. Pine not to mention it, and green tall and straight, straight upright in the hill slope. Surface of the lake, on a blossoming lotus to expand it in with the red and white flowers, is not a slim and graceful as a girl. In the sun's shining, the lake has reddish patches of Yin Lin. Cruise ship terminal, the variety of cruise ships next to a one, in the sunshine looked polished. In the sky, a bird is only free to fly. Water, 1 small fishes in the chase, the slapstick, playful.

Moon Lake Park is a quiet morning. Park, only a few elderly and young in the exercise. Some of them running, some stretching, some Lianjian ... ... Moreover, even the bees and butterflies who are difficult to see. Park, a tree as if waiting for the arrival of people, straight to erect a. Kids ran lightly in the park, it seems necessary to not wake up the flowers and trees to the wake.

Moon Lake Park in the morning is difficult to see, because it is a beautiful park.
 

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Beautiful flowers

National Day to the Tiananmen Square before the flowers were blossoming, and contests, and fragrant charm, then I'll talk about the beautiful flowers and your bar!

Sunflower father nodded toward the sun, smiling, as if to say: "Sun father, you look at me is pretty?"

Rose seemed to salute to the flag, singing the national anthem it!

Morning glory craned came to a branch next to the "episodes answered, subtitle A," the birds waking dream of it!  Aromatic sweet-scented osmanthus, as if painted with a new French perfume it!

Chrysanthemum giving her his new hair, as if proudly: "I am the most beautiful! I was the most beautiful!

Lotus insisted on a little green umbrella, as if to say: "I'm afraid 嗮 black, I'm afraid 嗮 black!"

The world has a wide variety of flowers, extremely beautiful, but want you to carefully observe nature themselves.

Lishui City, Zhejiang Province, Zhongshan, in the third grade Mo Lei Hang
 

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Beautiful campus

Our schools - Xianyou Experimental Primary School is one the best schools in the county, located along the roadside in Xianyou Party School Road.

The morning, stretching into the door, a beautiful and exquisite statues greet our eyes, a man and a woman, woman holding a book, as in telling us to study well and every day. Man's hand held hostage football, seemed to us to be more movement, there must be robust body. They erected in the garden, to become the campus a beautiful landscape. Garden in front is a large playground, a playground there are two large basketball courts, and outer circle of red, rich in the flexibility of plastic runway, even if the fall had not hurt.

The number of the most beautiful around the playground to a large banyan tree, which is like a mighty soldier guarding our campus. In the summer, it was like a green velvet umbrella to cover the sun too Yanyanshishi, people feel under the big banyan tree touch of cool, it can do for us to shelter against the elements!

I love my school! I have to learn because it is a paradise!
 

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Field Little Scene

My hometown has a field, in autumn it is even more charming.

Blue sky rows of geese are flying south for fear of nipped at his side. Pine, like soldiers in the same station

Straight, well they looked even more of a green. Trees do not know that the barber give them a head dyed blond hair, is perhaps the autumn invited to the bar girl. Trunk's eyes staring at kids, like Changzhuoxuduo secretly laughing. Burst of autumn wind blowing into their newly dyed hair and dumped down, like a butterfly fluttering just long forest dance. Within a short while on the paved a golden path. In this small way kids play in the play, some picking up fallen leaves ready to take home to do a careful observation of specimens; some take leaves to study its organs the various parts of the name of ... ... the end of the fields is an orchard. Glowing red apples are ripe, like a little child smile, bright purple grapes, like glass beads one by one up ... ... I really want to bite a big apple, eat the small bunch of grapes, if coupled with other However, the fruit so much the better.哈哈! You see that a few children who are under the pomegranate rack to help farmers uncle Zhai fruit enlivened by a few even the dog bark is called a non-stop, as if to say: "Zhai finished do not forget me ah, there is also my guards credit for it. "

I love the home field, because it is a beautiful field, but also harvest field.
 

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Azalea Park

If you ask me, in my summer vacation places to go where the most fun? I would readily said: "The Rhododendron Garden of the most fun."

Rhododendron Garden in Dayi County, where the pond edge, Yang Liu Suifeng swaying, as if beckoning to us, the garden flowers contests, and strange things, there are gorgeous peony, simple wild flowers, the magic is really flowers are blooming daffodils ... , flowers attract bees and butterflies is really a beautiful sight.

Azalea Park, not only to many plants, but animals are also very interesting. Azalea garden birds flying in the air, chirped Jiao Wan cried, as if singing a hymn; I went to the Azalea Garden Center Garden, where there is a cow, I'll ask it "hello", it "moo moo "Let the Liangsheng may retaliate to me, and I have no intention feet Yi Shen, cow went so far as to lick my feet, probably agree with what I mean. I feet an income, even back bull run, the original it is a veritable "timid buffalo."

Azalea Park, not only the scenery lovely, the meals are delicious, Pickle rabbit, boiled fish, spicy chicken ... ... memorable. I asked about the management of his uncle, the original there is a history here, in the past there are a lot of the cuckoo and azaleas, and later because of catching the birds were very much, and therefore the cuckoo flew away and never came back without the birds have also been Azalea effects fade, so the business is not good, and later repair of the Rhododendron Garden, hope that the Azalea Rhododendron Flower Show will once again be open to come back.

Ah, an azalea garden is like a beautiful picture of you, ah! There are crystal-clear streams, colorful flowers, there are numerous friendly and loving people that have been very beautiful, but if there are rhododendrons and the cuckoo to add luster the better.
 

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Home cloud
My hometown has many beautiful places. A beautiful bridge, with a beautiful garden, there are high mountains, there are clumsy and strong trees, with an enviable mix of Nanliu river, and so ... ... especially the fickle fog.

Cloud strange things. Mist-filled valley, it is like a winding stream. Mist-block mountains, it was like a huge marquee.

Ever-changing clouds. In front of clouds, or a just a beautiful little girl, an instant becomes a blossoming flower. Is obvious that only a lamb, not wait for you look carefully, it becomes a thousand miles in nine days to vent the Galaxy.

This is a cloud of strange things really blow people away.

Dabei third grade Yulin Li Hui-xiang
 

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Blue Sky


The sky is blue, because the universe is blue; the sea is blue, because the sky is blue; my lamp is blue, because my heart is blue.

When buying stationery, blue priority; election results, the blue than the indispensable; to buy clothes, blue blind. I seem to want to create a genus with its own blue sky.

Blue represents the youth, I hope to always be full of vitality; blue for happiness, I hope to ordinary happy life. In my eyes in my heart, on behalf of all the good things in blue.

Perhaps, so I aspire to is not only the blue this color, but Napian blue, the vast, boundless sky! I would like to turn into geese flying Napian coveted sky; I would like to become a bird, singing in the Feng ER, in the backdrop of white clouds, but why are dance, free flight! Yes, really make me aspire to be Napian beautiful blue sky!
 

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Community Garden

A small garden is located in the center of our district, the elderly and children exercise and play a good place to go. Garden flowers and trees, small bridges, garden loft, fitness equipment.

Spring, the grass from the ground Tanchunaodai trees out of the new branches grow verdant leaves, winter jasmine flowering early, and had told us it was like to come in spring. Old men walking with a puppy into the garden, the children Dangzhe swing, anglers leisurely leaning against the fence. We all bathed in warm sunshine of spring.

The summer, trees verdant green onions Polygonum posumbu long, very strong and long grass to see the last green one. The sun came out, Qian Wanlv like a sharp sword of golden light, through the trees, according to the grass. The lawn with a variety of wild flowers in full bloom, red, white, yellow, purple, and pretty great. Sunset in the red dragonflies shuttled back and forth from time to time in the water lily, sometimes a little water on the water, water will be leveling off from.

Autumn sky was clear of trees, leaves turn yellow. The green grass has become a golden autumn Fengyi Chui, leaves fluttering in the air and the ground is covered with another loose and soft leaves, like a layer of thick carpet shop. Occasionally, I will do just picked up a number of deciduous leaves sticker. In the garden in full bloom with sweet-scented osmanthus, chrysanthemum, Fragrance Spreading thousands of miles, competing for the Big Dipper-yan. . .

In winter, snow fluttering in the air and Sasa, bare branches on the flooded with snow. Northwest winds kick into gear the blowing, I and small partners in the snow snowball fights, snowman. Old people handle arch sleeves, the stamped, said: "Snow Mega years, ah."

A small garden is beautiful throughout the year, and it accompanied me to grow bit by bit happy memories of deeply branded in my mind, it is difficult to erase.
 

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Ten Thousand Buddhas Garden

I love the motherland, Jiang Shan, but I love Ten Thousand Buddhas home park.

Makha Bucha Park is located in the lush foothills. Came to the door, saw two majestic pride of lions guard at the door on both sides of the door floor of the Central Block, plum-shaped flower bed there. Along the heights, there is a long corridor. Around the corridor on each side of a pavilion, a pavilion by the eight gray columns supports, pillars to the top painted paintings. At the top of the pavilion is a yellow glass. Corridor column is red, and pole painting, there are many sorts of old paintings, extremely beautiful! I sat in the gallery, listening to the calls of birds Jojo, trance back to the ancient rooms. Corridor side has a pool, pool stands the seven swans, and some re-teach Little Swan fish, and some in the combed their feathers, and some playing.

I love my hometown! Ten Thousand Buddhas also love the beautiful garden!
 

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Campus parterre

Our school have a flower bed, flower beds throughout the year as a magician, and change come and go, each season has a different picture, and now I will give you slowly introduce bar. Spring, the flower bed inside opened a peach, this took special beautiful, like a little girl, in the trees to show off a few of the beautiful self, and its color is pink, it looks and posture together, they form a wonderful pieces of Chinese Painting.

Summer school Round Gardenia Lane in full bloom, so that the whole school change fragrance round our class the students often came to cover the one belonging to several, because of the gardenia Huatai Xiang.

Autumn, chrysanthemum flower in full bloom inside, some red, some are ... ... they are in full bloom with can be beautiful, and approached to see them, they seem to smile at you, to you, Xu Xu whispering!

Winter flower bed inside the Huadu Xie, is not it did not take out? Hey, is not, there are snowflakes.

Haha, our flower beds really beautiful ah!
 

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Deciduous

Leaves falling from the tree can not retain, or the pursuit of the wind.

The tree, your frustration, your obsession.

The wind, your dedication, your fascinating.

Leaves of the tree has brought to life, call made a green leaf, but also gave the tree leaves fall.

The wind touched the leaves of thinking, let show the most magnificent style, but also the end of the leaves fall wind.

Sun and moon wheel of reincarnation cycle, a rate blows but Qichu leaves always seem to inevitably face the world map, decorated on the vicissitudes little sign of gauze covered with layers of melancholy, leaves so they solitary Gone ------

But why not retain the total tree leaf, the wind is also cruel to abandon a leaf. The inability of the tree, or wind, cruel bear, only the leaves know ------

Tell of the arrival of spring, leaves will be reappearing. From this day begins, it will know its fate, the most bright moment lies in the fall and fall, because that day, it has mountains oath sea grass Union convention. They Meet in that dying season.
They do nothing for the elusive and Meet; them as a promise to the Meet; them as a consonance similarities and Meet ------
 

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