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The Class I am from
By Huang Liang Yu
My name is Huang Liang Yu, I have beautiful black hair. My eyes,
though not large, are bright. My skin has fair complexion, so there
are a lot of people say that I like doll.
Many people look at me and feel I am very quiet, much like the
ladies, in fact, I also have a lively side. Especially in the home,
I often performed humorous, and I am will bother his father and
brother, so my father said I am a "housekeeper." But mom always said
I was a good helper, because I often helped his mother with
housework, I also often was spotless clean home, so home looks very
clean, very comfortable.
I like reading, playing and singing ... and so on. My specialty is
piano, because piano can be played Couchu beautiful tone; another
drawing is my expertise, because the painting can play their own
imagination; I also love listening to music, because they can enjoy
the beautiful song; Recently I have had fans drama on the show,
because in the course of performing other people can learn the
strengths and weaknesses and to understand others.
I love the vegetables and fruits, because it allows the skin to
become white and tender, but I hate to eat sweet potatoes and taro,
because I do not like the kind of taste. Although the result of my
not very good, but my character is very neat, Dad always said that
my character is very beautiful, my mother would often say to me: "We
can see from a person's handwriting, to see this person is generous
or stingy Oh! "
My choice is when the big boss of the hotel because there are a lot
of people had no place to live, so I let them have enough to eat
every day, every day a good sleep; I hope which will give you all
safety, and gas gas, but also hopes that Taiwan is one of the best
country.
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My Trip to Japan
By Ting Chen Yu
The beginning of a long holiday, my mother arranged for the family
trip to Japan trip. The first trip to Japan is to "Disneyland"
playing. Team leader taught us how we can draw volume after rapid
dissolution of play, we play the first one is the "ghost
apartments," went one heard someone talking, but could not
understand, and then they turn into another space, but also hear the
same voice I think that is not terror, because it is false, then we
turn down a game.
The next game was "Space Mountain", which came in a lot of people
wait until our time, sit before you find out he is a fast roller
coaster, transfer ah turn to the last, my sister crying faster, but
we feel very fun. After coming out to play again, "Buzz Light year"
and also play "Julei Mountain", but also play "Winnie the Pooh's
house ... ... and so on games, one more than a fun, so I had a whole
day. Hungry Mickey eat hamburgers, take a break to see parades and
fireworks shows, her mother brings us to the store senior purchasing
souvenirs and toys, let me Liulianwangfan.
Followed by the trip is to HELLO KITTY park, small balls of the
hometown, Nagoya, etc., where I eat Japanese food, feel that they
love a good clean habits, and then the airport to go home, I was not
holding Yiyi homes for the mood, hope we can always come to Japan to
play.
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Title: Terracotta Warriors
The ground after the death of Qin Shi Huang Terracotta Warriors and
Horses is a security guard forces, they are a huge team, everybody
figurines look imposing Rin?, As is really the same as military
personnel. Some were holding swords, some holding bow, as well as
riding Mama cars .....
Terracotta warriors and horses is very precious, they are the
history of antiquities. After two thousand years have been excavated
from these terracotta warriors and horses of the looks, clothes,
weapons, you can learn Qin barbarian life. Qin's military forces is
the world-famous treasures, there are many foreigners would like to
see their true face?.
The very lucky and these terracotta warriors and horses to recover
from such a contact, I think these terracotta warriors and horses
good looking, as they call the weapons of the mighty and majestic
posture! I really hope that if you can have simply asked how Hurray!
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Title: Autumn fruit picking fun
Autumn, romantic fall, teachers at the end of the type of pressure
test, the band came to the outskirts of Taichung scenic pit mining
orange. To leave the rural school students outside the classroom
favorite, so happy that we set off on Friday.
Snow parking at the school gate a large double-decker bus is our
means of transport, walking on the mountain road meandering along
the road to enjoy the beauty of distant mountains and the
magnificent, verdant low-elevation shrubs, seems to me a smile, and
welcomed us to come. Destination and saw a tree hanging out one seed
of fresh oranges in the trees, the students were all happy cheer!
Under the guidance of friendly boss in the Orangerie, I gang entered
into orchard, orange tree shorter than what we imagine to hand, you
can feed, the teacher said: "This is when good tall, and can pick on
top of the more sweet orange ?! "
Picked oranges in the orchard happy, joy of tasting oranges,
students laughter. To go home see my neighbors and caretakers uncles
aunts and one person sent to an orange, but also to share our joy.
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Growing Up With
Books... My reading experience
"Life is unhappy incidents in all likelihood", that is in the
description of life alive, there will always be difficult, not as a
matter of heart, but how do you go to face is the most important.
A person's life an easy one, is a piece of happiness thing, but the
lack of a number of more exciting; on the contrary, the timely hit
by some of the difficulties, life seems to have a few more
challenges, because "under the sun, there is always fresh and
Thing ah! "Just when you encounter" difficult "when, how to face?
How to resolve? Positive people, will try his best to set an
example, breaking through difficulties, to save the crisis into a
turning point, until successful, will fail as a successful draw,
leaving him out ahead. On the contrary, the negative people have
only self-pity, complaining, after all nothing.
So, when we were facing "difficult" task, we should take active
steps to solve Do not dodge the negative, it is wrong. Taiwanese
saying goes: "seem to have suffered as a supplement diets," is the
same way bar!
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Thank difficult chapter by Zhang County
When I want to do something, we will find some problems, we tried a
variety of reasons, to convince they do not do it, escape it with a
way to escape.
I lug a lot of things to do, simple do first, and once the family
wanted me alone to buy something that I was afraid of the thought,
if the road there is a dog or a bad experience, how should I do? In
fact, adults usually have to tell me how to deal with, I still can
not be overcome, to defeat the difficulties, and gradually I found
that difficulty is invisible, the real resistance is themselves, as
long as the courage to face it to accept it, we will find it and not
difficult ah!
Face difficulties in life to do is to test our ingenuity, patience
and courage; it was God sent to test us, to understand the learning
process to get what ever is a rich and meaningful, let me thank the
difficulties increase in a lot of experience, let me better able to
face the future with an unknown thing.
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Diary - Taichung Folk Park Tour (95/12/12) 4-3 Yi Lin
Today is a sunny day, we went to visit the Folk Park, which have a
wide range amazing display of goods, there are tools, coins,
pictures, etc., but also to visit the quadrangles, each kind of
things are very strange.
Then we went to paint puzzle and small top, each student is doing
well, but I appreciate most of the top teachers, because bright
colors look very special.
Ate the meal, the teacher brought the class to play the game, and
let us other girls on stage performing. At once over-time fast, and
soon back to school, I really want to play for a while, I'm very
happy today.
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Diary - Taichung Folk Park Tour (95/12/12 Weather clear) 4-3
Ying-like
Today we went to "Taichung Folklore Park" made a trip to look for
monuments trip. In addition to understanding Folk Park, we also
painted the puzzle and small top, the feeling of antique buildings,
but also in the broad stage on the other girls, suddenly felt like I
was performing for Best Actress and feel terrific! Taichung is
really a good place.
Diary - Taichung Folk Park Tour (95/12/12 Weather clear) 4-3 Zhang
County Court
To the Folk Park to play today, so that impresses me most is the Wax
Museum, lifelike, just like real people, there is a large fish pond,
there are different colors of fish, big and fat, looks spectacular,
the joy the game is "Charlie's touch", the students were playing
very happy, I would like to play a few more in the folk park, let me
leave a good memory.
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Mid-Autumn Festival diary by Ya-Chun
The annual Mid-Autumn Festival in the hope for a long time, finally
arrived, and this year due to government policy, let us break a
five-day leave was so happy.
The annual Mid-Autumn Festival, the three will be with a small
cousin, aunt, cousin to go home reunion barbecue, this year was no
exception, so at home at once there are six children, six adults
were together for five days, can see how lively scene.
This year my mother, aunt prepared a lot of barbecue, vegetables,
seafood, drinks ... ... and so very rich, we are the day before the
barbecue at the Mid-Autumn Festival, when the uncle put up a good
charcoal, grilled meat, when the first film, we saliva flow out
faster because too hungry, so the adults have no time to meet our
barbecue six hungry mouth.
Mid-Autumn Festival this year, the weather good, so we enjoyed a big
round moon, as well as eating on holiday barbecue, grapefruit,
mooncakes, really happy and memorable A Mid-Autumn Festival!
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In the Autumn by 4-3 Siu Pui Yue
This year's Mid-Autumn Festival, outdoor concerts held in the
amphitheater. So the family decided to go to where the full moon.
Mom prepared cakes and grapefruit as well as other food, packed in a
picnic in the box, where they see a packed scenes, good fun Oh!
They climbed a small hill, out mats spread on the grass, in front is
a stage, lights flashing constantly, heard bursts of music, in the
endless sky, bringing a big round moon to illuminate grassland人们.
My sister holding a wand to play with fire and shiny, very pretty.
Dad lit rockets, a red-on, "bang" in a big soon as the next person,
shocked!
This year's Mid-Autumn Festival really special, not quite the same
as in previous years, I really look forward to next year have a
different experience.
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Acting Out My Feelings Yi Lin
Friday, the day of my after school hours are wasted, because
practice drama rehearsal, we spend a lot of time. Time quickly
passed, the next lesson we should think of acting, and I had
incredibly tight.
We went so far as this group is the first one in power, it really
was, I guess, and Well ~ no other way. Then suddenly over, the
protagonist of the original is that we do not back good lines, but
played a poor job, I was feeling should be played quite well, but
worse than I thought.
The group also played out one after another. The second group of the
most powerful voice loud and very lively and interesting, so I
really do not know how to describe enjoyable read, as we all very
admirable, because they are hard work, constant practice, can there
be such good results, we lose the convinced.
We are acting everyone to work together as a team, so you can learn
from each other, in the end there may be many unexpected harvest,
giving themselves a new look and become a full knowledge.
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Acting by Lu Jia Cai
Recent class boys did not go to play the original because of the
relationship between the text, the teacher wants us to use "a show"
to explain the meaning of texts, we show the title was the ninth
Lesson "pleasant journey", we were divided into five groups, this
class mainly in the speaking undersea animals.
Each class of people not in the painting, that is, doing props, no
one can go outside and play, and we do not slack this group, each
person has to do props, and finally reached its final stage, the
groups are done props, and we all the fire on the rehearsal on the
day of the show, the teacher suddenly said to be changed to the
afternoon section II, let us a lot of time can be more prepared to
wait until all ready then, we came to power acting on the first, but
it was a sudden forget the lines, and he is our hero.
Because this point so we do not have good results, I feel pity Oh
well, I think this time we have worked hard, and hope that the next
chance to a show.
"Night" is dark, and we have to swing out of vendors in town, inside
there is food, play, wear, and use.
... Should be fully utilized, the father said over the weekend to
take me to experience the fun.
Last Saturday of the. 19:00 more, Dad, Mom and I are walking hand in
hand, to the night market near his home, the smell came the first
bursts of aroma greet the eyes of the bosses is a lively and
enthusiastic crowds greeted sound, we can not wait for the first go
to fill his stomach, eating a steak eating a tofu hot dog.
Walked on and saw all sorts of vendors, there is Pinball, sets of
circles, fishing for goldfish ... and so on. My Father and I,
together Qulao goldfish, turtle fishing. Goldfish scooping is a
papered nets Qulao, look at the beginning of the net at break, under
water or two, and his father fishing for a few fish, seasoned, and I
had to go to catch a turtle, because the turtle's back were stained
with magnet, fishing rod is also a magnet, I have several fishing
just does!
This is the first time I Guangye Shi, not only to eat, drink, but
also very fun to play it! I think after every Saturday, I will be
Mom, Dad took me to! Because then the fun really can not put into
words.
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Pottery fun Chen Wei-cheng
I like pottery, usually spirits would be arbitrary to a pottery,
when bored, they will be clay as toys to play with pottery is really
very interesting.
I have used clay to make pen, insert the letter and other works.
First, pinch good shape, and then into the kiln firing, it will
become a complete pottery works.
Completion of ceramics can all be used as daily necessities, such
as: finish homework put the pen into the pen, the bill has not yet
paid on the letters on the plug where it is really easy and
practical!
The hot summer, there are clay with me, life became more enriched!
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No Title... Lam Chi Yun
ㄧ early in the morning, Dad took us and co-workers to go along with
Wang Gong. Wang Gong is a ㄧ a small fishing village, the village
women and children were busy with the digging oysters, forming a
special picture.
We rode oysters car to go to the beach at low tide to dig clams,
oysters the first time I sat the child car, driving uncle called me
and my brother sitting on the roof, he said that the roof line of
sight is good, which I have never experienced experience, feeling
quite fresh.
To the beach, we began to dig clams. Father and brother to quickly
dug, and I dug Lao Bantian, nothing dug, pants already wet half of
it urges, Dad said laughingly: "This is the so-called touch of lunch
wash pants
We also rode oyster car, went to Laos to visit the child oyster
oyster farm work. I did know that usually we eat oysters, was
originally kept in the sea until plump oysters, the oyster farmers
to harvest their bamboo raft and then sail. We are also on-site raw
oysters, salty, there are ocean flavor!
Grateful to my father the first day of summer, it? We arranged this
trip a wealth of eco-tours!
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Summer Xie Yun-shan
A refreshing morning, our whole family came to enjoy the lotus TPG.
Lotus is also called the lotus, a year in May to October is the
flowering period, flowering the morning to the afternoon break, so
Shang He must grasp the timing of the morning really good time.
Mom said: "If, when Shanghe 4:00 in the morning, you can hear the
voice of the lotus flower Oh! But can also use straw dew on a lotus
leaf taste it!" I am eager to hear!
There are budding lotus, lotus in full bloom, as well as greatly
Lian Peng, full of beauty. Together we have and the lotus photo,
photographed the most beautiful moment.
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Hsitou day trip ..... ... Lai Ying-yu
We start from home early in the morning and arrived at 8:00, but
when Hsitou, but it is intermittent traffic, huge crowds of people
had. Finally to find a parking place, bought admission?, Began
today's forest bath ....
First, enter the eye is a large forest, we walk in the forest,
listening to the wonderful sound of bursts of insects for birds
came. Unconsciously, had reached even higher than the bridge "air
corridor", I looked to the bridge before they find themselves in
mid-air, even the tree is even higher than it! Feet "Pipi Cuo" I
feel like going to fall out, and awful, oh!
Finally reached Shenmu area, the tree was originally a tall, old
trees, because they are lightning clap off, so can not continue to
grow, It is a pity 呀! We are here after a short break and went on to
the "rock" forward, the way after a spring, we use spring water to
wet a towel, and then cold towel facial, I feel good comfortable!
We use holiday weekends every week to fresh air, the rivers, not
only to watch distant mountains near trees, they can be with their
families walking, hiking, really double benefit!
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Games canopy Yao
November 25th arrived, a special day, so that we filled with
expectations, the original just the beginning of the General
Assembly to stimulate the movement.
One came to school, unable to recover the smiles on the faces,
everyone is very excited, not long afterwards, we head wore goggles,
holding hands walking on the colored balls at the line, I was taking
class card, so the station In the first; in teacher leadership, came
to the waiting area. Wonderful dragon and lion dances after the
appearance of the athlete to begin entering! Sixth-grade Big
Brothers Big Sisters head wearing a headscarf and orderly approach.
Fifth grade, with sixth-grade about right; Then, we played the
fourth grade, hand waving colored balls, in the music, show the
results of practice every day! I took classes license, upright
walking in the forefront of the good feeling of an air Oh!
Soon, the General Assembly on the turn of the fourth grade dance, I
am hard to jump, the hearts of the 1212's beat time, although the
hot weather makes me sweat, but I am still making efforts to jump I
just want to get the spirit of the overall championship Awards!
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Tiaowan Assembly dance, exhausted aisle rest area, a field watching
the earth-shattering performances,. The first is classical, good 讚喔!
I remember when I was a member of, and later the interest of time,
so I quit on their own. The next program is the organization of a
number of mothers groups, I do not have to read 啦! Fun fun
competitions, although we are all striving, but still did not name,
do not lose heart, as well as the relay! Finally, to begin the
relay, and one received a rod, my doom, and went faster legs broken,
and still not catch up with the first two girls, was extremely
disappointed! The closing ceremony, I listlessly holding classes of
license, quietly thinking about every moment, every second, I
actually do not need such a sad, "not be conceited, defeat is not
hungry." Believe that the next success!
Writing back to list
Last Friday, the teacher announced: "November 25 Saturday, the
school should be to launch the Games "Class 1, Calvary's blood boil.
Because, very exciting! November 25 to 7:45 am must go to school
collection, but I do not have to set, because I was a pacesetter.
Approach to the athletes to stand up Xiaoqi a total of 30 minutes,
tired 呀! But I can see the athletes high spirits of the approach, it
is tough is worth Oh! Then I participated in the General Assembly,
dance, fun competitions, so I am most looking forward to the
forthcoming start of the relay! Gearing the class to go all out,
forward sprint relay, winning third place! Ye! Great! "Unity is
power," Games is not a one-man show, more than on parallel tracks.
Therefore, there is hope
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My favorite book .... yu Zhang
My favorite book is about the biblical story of "Jacob" This book,
as kind-hearted enthusiasm Jacob, but also charity, and often
disregard their own lives and how much hard, always single-minded
with the help do not know.
In this book, the most impressive is this: To Jacob and his uncle's
second daughter's wedding, preferring to help his uncle worked for
seven or eight years, and finally the US-Jiaoniang Qude; but finding
it impossible to leave the selfish The narrow-minded uncle, and this
time, James also had four wives and 12 children, all of which were
boys.
Jacob had tried to flee with his family beside her uncle, but they
can not do so; he was a filial child, as one would like to go home
to visit his elderly father, and finally to come home to the Ru Yuan
saw his father one last time. Of his 10th child was also sold to
other countries, to become king of the most right-hand man for the
King of dream interpretation, but also helped the king a lot of busy
people are going to the support and love; he is the grandson of a
friend of God, and his grandfather is the famous Abraham, and he is
an honest, dedicated, who often received no remuneration for the
help people, something that makes me moved, and most would like him
to learn Oh!
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My interest and expertise Authors: Ting-eup
Everyone has their own interests and expertise, for example: Some
people love reading, some people run fast, some people love playing
music, and some people good art ... ... and so on.
I have very broad interests, I love to read novels, in art class to
do crafts, painting, slip-line skates, playing the piano ... ... and
so wonderful interest. I love to read fiction because I read the
novel can develop reading skills, but also allows me to broaden
their horizons, so I have a lot of new knowledge and enriched my
soul. In addition, whenever I have an art class, I will always be
particularly happy with the expectations art class because it can
create many crafts, so I used their imaginations to make unique
works, and my favorite hobby is playing the piano , it was said:
"The love of music not be bad." sincerity of the contingent, I
deeply feel that music can be nursed back to our temperament, this
is my favorite piano reasons.
And my expertise is with the art-related, such as: playing the
piano, painting. Why is playing music and painting is my expertise
it? Because from the past to now, I have spent a lot of time and
effort, but also because I have two events is always filled with
delightful mood, it will go all out to succeed in life. And during
this period, I have come across difficulties in the bottleneck, but
the last can be solved in order to continue. I also hope that my
expertise can be used in a useful place, the future might be as a
musician or painter, or might even do! Writing back to list
If the campus to see a short stature, wearing a pair of jeans, plus
a pair of shoes, shuttle between the stairs and classroom aunt; big
eyes, next to a black eye with a deep, dark red hair in the sun the
next will be glittering, no doubt, that I agree with that a bit old
and the old mother. She is also very enthusiastic about gods, in
class activities, often saw her busy busy east west presence. After
school, at the school gate waiting for the parents of the children
are still encountered, it will forward to care about where help was
needed. And she was a loving mother, when the favorite station guide
care with the line of students crossing the road joke because she
was always chatting with the kids, forgetting attention to signals
of change. It really can not stand!
"You're white heads the eldest Oh!" "White head is it?" This is my
little sister clever and a bit confused, confused the situation, she
always outside. Most common is that her mother had been angry, she
confused the situation, where Dadanaonao, so often scolded. But she
has a very good habit - reading, always reading, when the input;
remember ㄧ times, his sister up the toilet at night and suddenly
remembered bedtime stories read only half, in turn pick up the book
to continue to reading, until the father called her, it was found
had been the day broke. Really see ecstatic ah!
These are my lovely family, I love you! However, if you will not
like me as a little pet to tease, then I would be more love you Oh!
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A scene outside from my window * Chen Yiying
Trees, birds creak is called, the scenery outside the window feeling
like I saw the window of the world is my bad mood, the best
antidote. My room had a window, which the scenery outside the
windows is my treasure, in my bad mood, it always comfort me; in my
boredom, it is just to keep my friends to pass the time. This is
outside the windows I can not imagine the world is big, but I know I
can see the scenery outside the window. In summer, I always looked
out the window of the birds fly freely in, I sometimes envy those
from the wings of birds that can fly in the sky with! In winter, I
always looked at the cold was intense in the window, look forward to
personally see the snow falling in front of me. Bored, the window of
the sky with me no one disturb the enjoyment of the afternoon.
The sky outside the window revealed my feelings sometimes, like on
rainy days, let me cry; sunny day let me immense pleasure; and
cloudy day, let me stuffy looking for something to kill time; When
Lei Chen, after the afternoon rain, it's a sister and I quarreled,
gas Daotou fast, like an explosion, but soon, and better. Sometimes
birds outside the window to do is dream woke me up, and causing me
to feel bad all day, or else the sun awake the dream of me, makes me
so angry furious.
Sometimes take a look at the scenery outside the window would make
me very happy; and sometimes out of the window things will harm me
in a bad mood, not peace, but because this way, the scenery outside
the window of my life has become an indispensable part of it.
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My School of six years ..... Zhang
Jinglun
School! Many terrible ah! Can not sleep every day he woke up, could
not play one day, he wrote a lot of work, faced with "terrible"
teacher, but also examinations, ~ not ~ This must be a nightmare ~
"ah ~."
School, new semester, there are many new things going to adapt to,
such as class, two new students to come; there is a humorous, so
that students Scared of getting a new teacher; there is the same as
a terrorist case both frightening and exciting of the new textbooks;
later it is not clear orientation of the new classrooms; Finally,
and most worth mentioning is that the new cleaning work, and still
remember every day, dirty foul sweep, but also sticky wet toilet
again, and now have to sweep President's Office, is a world of
difference between the two can be said ah! However, the extent of,
but equally hard-Oh!
But some things are still as before, such as: schools, attracted me
the most is the place's best students, the most lively playground
wind and rain, the most fun physical education, of course, the most
lovely of her younger brother learn Hello!
One thought there are so many interesting things, unknowingly become
a nightmare to dream of!
In fact, school is not bad Well, a lot of novelty waiting for me to
discover a new semester refueling!
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Visit the 101 Building
Holidays, and my father often we see open-car-law live in Taipei and
grandfather. Each arrived in Taipei when I looked, one after
another, covered with gray-black buildings in Taipei City as a
whole; one of the most prominent are: well-known 101 buildings; 101
Tower stands high in the sky, pointed to the top pointing to the
sky. That is a skyscraper close to paradise. It was a sunny, sunny
day. Then I opened my sleepy eyes The eyes of Blur's, from the air,
feel the breath of the morning. 8:30, and we are dragging luggage,
boarded the car, start toward Taipei. On the road, my eyes fixed
straight out the window to see, a car zips by Taiwan and Taiwan;
looking tired, with the music to sing. Finally to the mother house
of the! Grandmother and grandfather smiling to greet us. Good
comfortable 喔! Can be a good rest! I asked the old lady is really
going to 101 building? Grandmother next day will be. Nice! Finally
able to go! Ever since heard that 101 buildings cover, and I want to
go to the above, good to see your fill the whole of Taiwan. Nice!
The afternoon can go to 101 a! I put on the cap, and thought about.
Let's take the bus to Shilin MRT, then take the MRT to a restaurant
to eat lunch, to the Shin Kong Mitsukoshi shopping After buying, we
take the air bridge to 101. Along the way under the bridge side
there are some street performers, we also stopped to look at their
performances. In this way, all the way to stop-go, come from the
air, building 101. To the 101 building is actually a department
store, 10 it is necessary to take the elevator up, and we eat a few
things, and then line up tickets, selling tickets young lady said
that today not only to take the elevator to the 89 floor, you can
also climb two floors to the 91 floor, outdoor stargazing, it may
not even leave the relationship between the Mid-Autumn bar with my
sister after her mother passed to other people getting the fastest
speed to line up because it is time to eat so quickly we into the
elevator of an elevator dark also gradually moving up the ceiling
shone down an unearthly light, light bulbs are arranged in the Milky
Way constellation, continuous flashing light; everyone stare the
stare at the ceiling. Elevator continued up, my heart flew up along
with the lift. Ah? How to stop the lift down! Ah? How suddenly to
it? I am puzzled as out of the elevator. Wow! Haopiaolianga!
Virtually the whole of Taipei City to see. Mother took my sister
now, pointing to the window, mouth, said: "This should be the Taipei
Railway Station, which is Hsin Yi Road, which is a beautiful Chinese
bridge ... ..." grandmother, sister also followed to study the large
map of the windows. But me? Has been looking at this as Zhensi
phantom of the night; a small house with bread crumbs, as the effect
point of the building, like rectangular sandwiched, as people? See
how that can not see. Later, we climbed the two upstairs, with the
indoor little different, but more than a row of metal framework "to
prevent people too excited, and thus fall to the" because there was
cold, we quickly looked at, then go back. I remember the last one
and see the orange moon, really strange. Trip to Taipei is really
right in! Not only bought many things, but also to the 101 look at
the scenery, I really hope that the next can be once more 101
buildings, preferably during the day because the night can not see
the Keelung River.
Writing back to list
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Recorder Music Competition
Primary School Recorder Band Contest Taichung, the day finally
arrived today, I felt really nervous and looked forward to.
We eat dinner at noon by bus to the race venue ─ Dah Sing Primary
School, one to the activity center to see a lot of opponents, I am
nervous, but I still strive to overcome the psychological fear.
Finally our turn came to power, and the previous fear disappears do
not know why, I followed the music and swing up and quickly finished
the song playing, and then heard the burst of warm applause, he
easily bow to step down. Then a small playing for other countries,
wonderful notes fluttered, performing after the Announcement of
results awaited book.
Has finally announced the results of time to, I could almost hear
everyone's heartbeat, when the referee declared: "The third Laicuo
Elementary School, the second Chunghsiao Elementary School, first
place - Chongqing Primary moment, he heard there have been repeated
waves of cheers, simply on the fast break through the atmosphere-YA!
We won! and this is our first ei! was so happy.
Ah I really wish the next national competition, we can be number
one! I would like to the extent of excitement, should be delivered
with the Duha Ya Lin, Chinese Taipei baseball outwit the same
excitement. Winning
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Recorder Competition - Peng Xin Hao
This Tuesday, we play an active role when the recorder orchestra,
since the annual game recorder to someone now. Day, I was holding
tight feeling to school, and quietly waiting for the arrival at
noon. After lunch, we went to Dah Sing Elementary School.
A total of eight schools to play, and we are playing the sixth, and
I quietly listen to performances at other schools, each blowing
good, finally finished fifth team blowing someone now, I am very
nervous on stage and In accordance with the teacher's command of a
playing a serious, to the last one, probably because of the tense
transition, blowing faster, and finally blown over, we walked the
Zouxia Tai.
After over the pages of Enter the Dragon, to the time of the
announcement ranking, Chongqing, the first primary! This is too
happy, and everyone cheered, and our reviews are a good team spirit,
but the blown back too fast, and next time I will work hard so that
they are not nervous, I will continue to push hard.
Mid-Autumn Festival BBQ
Friday afternoon, my father opened his car factories in our family
the space to the barbecue,
There, they are up the fire, there are some people coming one after
another.
First, we brought our baked oysters, shrimp ... ... .. and so on,
wow! Oyster shell opened up I took one to eat, good fat very big
oysters, a salty bite down feel like being in the ocean, but I still
prefer to eat shrimp, and my father added some wine down grill until
shrimp all flushed you can eat, and tasty shrimp flavor is really
delicious, and my brother and sister have also liked to eat, plant
suddenly cooked a pot of soup out of the meatballs, which added
corn, balls, big cucumber
Wow!
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