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September 21 in the
small hours, in his sleep and was awakened to a burst of intense
shock and wake up when it is dark; Fortunately, all the family
well-being, housing is also not damaged. Dad told us after the main
shock Do not be afraid, if we are to continue to sleep, but then
place one after another several strong aftershocks, it is so rickety
in the stay up in the dawn.
Dad on the radio that morning, the Taiwan earthquake that occurred a
century rarely scale up to seven. 3, the central region of the most
devastating disaster, not the number of houses were toppled, there
are many fellow citizens have been crushed to death a living, many
people became homeless overnight, also made a lot of children
orphaned and tells the people listening to whom is also sad.
Fortunately, the typhoon, the province's people would be playing the
"Rennijini, people have been hungry hungry," the brotherly love, we
have money to donate, Youlichuli, ready to help the survivors
rebuild their homes.
We are lucky here, no natural disaster occurs, you can continue to
go to school, our Care for children hit their sadness, they should
cherish the good fortune to read.
Elementary 6th grade,
Kaohsiung City, Taiwan
My Wishes for
the New School Semester
Vacation days always fly by. The moment has passed most of the
summer, followed by the advent of the new school year is, in the
summer, I have been ready.
In physical terms: Every Sunday my father and I have to go morning
run, from the non-stop. Morning run is a good exercise, both
physical, but also breathe fresh air, really serve the dual
purposes. In the new school year in order to obtain a higher depth
of knowledge, a healthy body is essential. Hope that this semester,
is no longer "worms", but strong as an ox.
Smart: the summer vacation and I-yi-chul's brother and sister go to
the library looked at a number of extra-curricular reading
materials, including the ancient great stories, legends of the
Journey to the West and the important figures of ancient allusion to
see more of the book more useful to be able to expand our physical
and mental knowledge.
The new school year started, I hope I can every success in the head,
further, it is necessary to meet the new school year with
Time passes, we can not stop, but often our emotions said: "If you
turn the clock back, that I do not know how Hurray!" This is
something that we should be very familiar with, however, the matter
may be achieved? We all know that impossible, so we should take your
time and go do something meaningful.
First of all, we should look at itself, yesterday, is clearly the
one hand, frankly mirror. We want to improve the shortcomings of
yesterday, so yesterday, the shortcomings of the advantages of
today; to the shortcomings of today's improvements to create a more
perfect tomorrow than today, so that their progress over time, there
is a perfect life.
I think we should take today to New Youxin. We must use today's time
to continue the work of yesterday, in addition to correcting the
shortcomings of yesterday, the most important thing is: "Today it
today completed." Do not till tomorrow, so as to make full use of
the "new" day, we need a good plan, but also the vigor and urgency.
I hope you will be properly planned tomorrow, be able to cherish the
precious time, then we will certainly succeed.
The person I honor
most in my life :
Each people once had experienced the
adverse circumstance which not the satisfactory matter or difficult
to suffer. Possibly is the friend who and you care about very much
care about very much cuts eight breaks; Perhaps the test tests very
much rottenly, thought that will not as if forever have date of the
turning over; Perhaps has had a big sickness, loses the health;
Perhaps is by others misunderstanding, you are clarifying anxiously
actually more trace are blacker, the mood is banished to the lowest
hell probably, does not have the light and the hope; After perhaps
is and the parents loudly quarrel flies from one's home, actually
completely lost face goes home to them saying that the sound sorry
....... Each person experiences differently, but once had had the
time which very difficult to suffer. Now, these have become the past
events, we walked, after passing through, also mature sensible some.
How do you are walk? Very lucky, many people once had the honored
person to help one another, pull your. Possibly is the good words
persuades, perhaps directs for you for you to with the suggestion,
perhaps listens respectfully patiently carefully, perhaps, because a
few words let you like restore justice a discovery hope infinite new
world, perhaps for you a warm hug, perhaps accompanies you to
withstand all pressures silently, perhaps stranger accidental
touches your heartstrings the action ....... These help us the
person, is in the life honored person. Now, which asked you to
recall in your life once to have to have the matter which the
honored person helped one another? You have been very perhaps happy,
then must thank father and mother, when a your honored person group
walks gives you happily joyful. Perhaps you have is sad, then thinks
in the process once to have which people with what method to help
you to pass through sadly passes through the tears, lets your heart
fly upwards once again, lets your soul live once more? The love is
the life power. Our life is the love masterpiece, these once were
following our love were the hope seeds, helps us to be possible
heartily and weaves the life beautiful dream bravely. Writes down
this life's in small story, also takes advantage of this expresses
the opposite hit honored person's deep gratitude!
Feelings after the earthquake
921 - By Ling Wujia
On September 21 at midnight, I was
asleep when dreams are sweet, intense
burst suddenly shaking, my Shook from their sleep, The Perfect
Storm, the original earthquake. Yi Gulu we climbed up, neighbors
also called trouble together, The argument goes on, the chatter from
the trembling, the easily detectable in the hearts of everyone
At dawn, at the breakfast table, overheard the radio news reports
before they know there are so many
In shaking, the loss of precious lives and their beautiful homes,
are surprised and sad when the injury
But the number continued to rise. . . . Without any psychological
preparation conditions, the "921 earthquake" shattered
each person's heart and shattered you my
The earthquake shaking was me emotional, we can see the power of
nature, is really alarming. Let condensate Junction of all the
power, together hand in hand, heart to heart, came to this
heartbreaking disaster, and and the national with the Qi Li cell
concentric to assist the affected families rebuild their homeland.
My hobby -- By
Wu Yi Che-Min
Turning a hobby, in fact, everyone has his own favorite hobby. If
people do not hobby, then he would be happy every day, did not
happen, life is tantamount to Gaomusihui become no fun. If this is
live, then we live in this world, what does that mean?
Since I dare say so, of course, I would certainly have their own
favorite hobby, my hobby is playing basketball. Common in schools,
as long as the bell after class, our class group who love to play
basketball 』『 buddies will swarm rushed the basketball court,
dolphin and pudgy bodies, basketball, going by our photograph, the
voice of the ball into the basket , 『』 brush is heard, sounds like a
valley-like sweet warbler loud. Therefore, the time to play
basketball every day is my happiest time of the.
As for my basketball so why have a special liking for it? That is
because the class have begun to spread very early to play
basketball. However, when other students every time I go and play
basketball, they have always said to me: 『bad for your basketball
skills, and go back and train for a few years come 啦! 』I listened to
really upset and ashamed, since then I who had become, desperate
Lian Qiu, determined to carry forward the Spirit of『 Sakuragi, less
than a few months work, I made rapid progress in the game beyond
other students, and I Start crazy love basketball, basketball
finally became my favorite hobby of the!
Basketball is really a good exercise. To play basketball will not
only help our body to become healthy, you can also relieve stress,
but also can develop our team spirit, let us understand the
importance of division of labor,
Addicted to books like Ming Wu Yi
-- By Shi Xin Yu
Everyone has their own hobbies, I'm no exception, my hobby is to
read a variety of books.
I grew very fond of reading, as long as the opportunity to catch
one, I would have rushed to study non-stop, hiding in that tens of
thousands of books in the mountains, enjoying the fun of reading,
parents often can not find my reason , often furious anger,
Qiqiaoshengyan. My father knew I Aikan Shu, they often give me
books, or take me to the library reading books, I often see will
want to return reluctant to leave and how his father left to both
hard and soft, I still insist on there, and roam the world in the
book Lane. Thus it often angered his father enough to create
misunderstandings, irony, said: 『my daughter really married to book.
』In this way, I was almost an all day stay in that treasure trove of
knowledge, the seen enjoying themselves, to have to go home, you
also have to want to borrow books to go home, do not simply asked
again later! Childhood, I have always and books as partners, on the
toilet reading, walking and reading, falls and you still see with
gusto, oblivious to their knees are bleeding profusely it! So, I
book the loyalty of the bar!
On the kindergarten, my passion for reading is hidden easily
understood, teachers and students often feel bewildered, as if I do
not have the book does not work, because I do not read books all the
time, there's always a book in the hands of it! I think I am really
a book such as the fate of people addicted to Jesus!
Reading books is a very good hobby, book is one of the most learned
teacher of dumb, its belly hidden higher than the mountains, deeper
than the sea of wisdom. Hope that we can book to visit lot of
teachers, so that we get dumb the teacher sent us a super gift ─
By SHI Ming-fu
On at 1:47 on September 21, a major earthquake shattered the hearts
of people throughout the country. While the people of Taiwan into
the earthquake to our fears, but also to withstand the uneasy
feelings, it must go to face the future must bear stress, these are
things that we can not go to understand.
The next day saw television reports of the seriousness of the
disaster stricken areas, houses collapse down, and died the death of
these victims are now become homeless. An earthquake, resulting in
many deaths and injuries, there are lots of kids meant to be lived
happily ever after, has now become an orphan, really pathetic. Hope
that the Taiwan people to brave out of that sad environment to face
the reality of life, I hope you have money to pay, Youlichuli, and
then rebuild from the beautiful homes, re-living a carefree and
We are that they can live, should feel very fortunate because we
survived the quake catastrophe, perhaps God have mercy on us, so we
should cherish their own lives more concerned about everyone around
Saturday, we held a class activity,
activity is the auction, many people bought a lot of items they
need, this auction I have never Meixianshiguo, but I find it very
Auction the source of their own do not need to donate something to
sell, just like the exchange of the same toys, but use different,
someone who brings fans; someone who brings books, balls, dolls, toy
cars, pens, pencil boxes, etc., say Playing today, we are also very
From this auction, I found everyone very enthusiastic, very united,
that people have been asking price; some people first before their
own ability to measure asking price; some items have been getting
really exaggerated ah!
A few days before the event that somebody has decided to buy
something, but I have no choice, I do not know whether to buy, but
this event will enable me to experience the joy of helping others.
Today is October 16, I especially get
up early, because our class will be opening the morning of the
auction, I am very excited.
Class, and everyone who could not help but want to see what the big
deal with things, the teacher came, and everyone happy cheers.
Auction will be a start, the teacher put things on the table,
everyone raise their hands and offer people to buy dolls; people to
buy toys; also bought a pencil. I bought a little white rabbit, she
had a white hair; there is a pair of purple ears, it seems really
pleasant, I also bought a gun given to his younger brother.
This time the auction, so that we can choose what you like, you can
also have the opportunity to help people is really a meaningful
If I were a teacher
-- Lin Zhewei
If I were a teacher in class, I would like to implement education of
love, in the most humorous tone to teach my students. In this way,
my students will enjoy school.
If I were a teacher, the classroom, I want my students to play with,
along with the game. I would also like to tell them what to play,
could not play anything, play anything to be careful .... And so on.
In this way, my students will definitely be played with enjoying
Although they would not become a teacher do not know, but I believe
that every person who wanted to be a teacher, a teacher in a certain
city before the first plan something; think about it later became a
teacher, to teach them how the students will not class when the
blush on stage, heads bowed, in a word could say.
My favorite toy --
My aunt gave me a lot of toys, there are robots, cars, YO-YO ball.
Of these, my favorite toy is a robot and yo-yo.
My robot can change out the trains, planes, three kinds of police
vehicles. Police cars can also be turned into robots do!
My yo-yo will be light, I will have a lot of the art, there is the
clock swing, a little dog home, dog-walkers and so on, these are the
skills I will, cool bar!
I had these toys as is my good friend, I hope you be properly
jealous of their toys, put it as their own treasures.
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