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Making Decisions Essay, English Composition Writing
on Making Decisions
(1) Growing up means making my own decisions. When I was a little,
my parents made all the tough decisions for me. But while I am
getting older and older, I felt that I can make decisions for
myself! It occurred to me that I have got to face all the
difficulties on my own. Otherwise, I can't succeed in the future.
The hardest decision that I have ever made was keeping a diary every
day. At first I usually got lose of it, but I found a lot of
pleasure in keeping a diary eventually. Every night I sit at my desk
and rethink the happened during the day's events before I go to bed.
After I write my feelings down, I can always be in a comfortable
mood. I have so many experiences in my diary. Keeping diary is not
only a good habit, the diary itself is also a good friend of mine.
I'll keep one for the rest of my life.
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(2) Growing up means making my own decision. In my
childhood, whenever I was put in a difficult situation or had
trouble making up my mind, I turned to my parents for advice without
exception. However, with time going by, I grow up and have to cope
with my own personal affairs. On the one hand, I am granted more
freedom to handle matters in my own ways. On the other hand, I also
have to take responsibility for the consequences of my decisions.
Well goes a saying, " There is no free lunch. " In addition to
entitling me to many privileges I used to be denied, growing up also
obligates me to make my own decisions.
The hardest decision that I ever made was whether I should attend
vocational school or ordinary high school. Going to vocational
school meant being exempt from pressure and tension. Thus, I could
enjoy a pleasant and carefree school life. Attending ordinary high
school would make it imperative for me to cram for the Joint College
Entrance Examination. This meant another three years' hard word and
sacrifice an opportunity to receive higher education. After a
careful consideration and discussion with my parents, I finally
decided to attend senior high school And this decision has made all
the difference.
An Essay About Making
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