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Essay on Department Stores, Department Store Essay, Example Department Store Essay

My family always goes to a department store during the holidays, and we often watch some of the newest movies in the movie theaters and eat delicious food there. My dad always goes to the clothing stores and my mom always goes window shopping. My brother, sister and I will go to the video arcades to play some games.

The shopping malls offer the most convenient way to shop because it has lots of stores in there, such as bookstores, clothing stores, restaurants, video stores and many others. You can buy anything you want and have a good time, so just don't stay in your house and act like a coach potato.

It doesn't cost you much to go to a department store, If you just window shop. My mom always does that. Shopping at the department stores can provide you with many hours of fun.
 

 

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