Black is student's original writing
Blue is teacher's correction Red is teacher's explanation
Note: Essays below are contributed by students, and are
not corrected and NOT meant for
instructional purpose. Email me if you wish to include your
Example Book Fair Essay.
Composition Writing Sample
Do you like to read?
Reading is a good pastime. I love reading when I am free or bored. Ialways read some philosophical books, romance novels
especially and comic books, of course.
Have you been to the Taipei International Book Exhibition? I didn't,
but many people saythat is an excellent
book fair. Believe it or not, there were more than 30,000 people in
that bookfair last year. It is a great
meeting place for not only book lovers, but also many writers fromdifferent countries. As a visitor, you may have the chance to
meet your favorite writers, and youcan
also see some writers promoting their latest books there.
Doesn't it sound great?
Book fairs are an excellent place to read and buy books. I’d
like to go there some day and I'd want to go to the comic book