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Basketball Essay,
Sample Composition Example on Basketball
(Uncorrected)
Playing basketball is a good way to exercise, and I like it very
much. In the beginning, I was just a rookie, but after practicing a
lot, I have become a good basketball player.
I like playing basketball after school, because there are many
students at the basketball court, so I can play with them and
improve myself. I can also make friends by playing games with them.
In the holidays, I always play basketball with my cousin, and he is
a good player, too. However, he likes to shoot by himself, and I
don＊t like this. I like playing as a team, which is good and nice.
Why do I like to play basketball? It is because I love the NBA. I
first watched the NBA when I was in elementary school grade 6 and I
began to enjoy the sport, till now. I always play basketball when I
have time. Maybe I can play with you too, teacher, but I think I
will lose because you are too tall..
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