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Basketball Essay, Sample Composition Example on Basketball (Uncorrected)

Playing basketball is a good way to exercise, and I like it very much. In the beginning, I was just a rookie, but after practicing a lot, I have become a good basketball player.

I like playing basketball after school, because there are many students at the basketball court, so I can play with them and improve myself. I can also make friends by playing games with them. In the holidays, I always play basketball with my cousin, and he is a good player, too. However, he likes to shoot by himself, and I don*t like this. I like playing as a team, which is good and nice.

Why do I like to play basketball? It is because I love the NBA. I first watched the NBA when I was in elementary school grade 6 and I began to enjoy the sport, till now. I always play basketball when I have time. Maybe I can play with you too, teacher, but I think I will lose because you are too tall..

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