Example Essay on a Trip to Southern
Taiwan. Sample Composition Writing on Taiwan Trip
Last tuesday my mother’s company made a travel to
South Taiwan and I went with my mother, I was so happy that I can go
to South Taiwan and so did my mother.
The first day of the travel we went to Chen Lake
Mountain amusement park and played very happy, we went to Kaoshong
and went to night market, the next day, we went to Kenting and
played with the ocean, and we went to another night market again,
but this one is bigger than last one, when we on the way home, my
mother told me that she would like to went to South Taiwan in the
Chinese New Year, and she also said she very like the hotel in the
Kentin, it’s very comfortable.
I think this is a good thing to relax, I like to go
again with my mom, south Taiwan is a very good place to visit.
A Trip to Southern Taiwan
Last Tuesday, my mother’s company had a trip to
Southern Taiwan and I went with her. I was so happy that I can go to
Southern Taiwan, and so was my mother.
On
the first day of the trip, we went to Chen Lake Mountain Amusement
Park and we had a wonderful time. We continued to Kaohsiung and went
to visit the night market. The following day, we went to Kenting
National Park and enjoyed ourselves in the ocean. We visited another
night market again, but this one is bigger than the last one. When
we were on the way home, my mother told me that she would like to go
to Southern Taiwan again in the Chinese New Year. She also
said that she likes the hotel in Kenting, because it is very
comfortable.
I think this is a good way to relax. I like to go to Kenting again
with my mom. Southern Taiwan is a very good place to visit.
Travel
A Trip to Southern Taiwan
(Your title is not appropriate. It should be about a
“Trip to Southern Taiwan”)
Last
tuesday
(Big “T” for Tuesday)
Tuesday, my mother’s company
made (You “had” a trip is better.
Yes, you can say make a trip because it is not wrong. Just “had” is
better) had a
trip travel
(Not “travel”. Try to use the noun “trip”.
You use travel like this : We traveled to …”. You just don’t say we
“had a travel”) to Southern
(Use “Southern” because it is an adjective
that describes Taiwan. “South Taiwan” is not wrong too, if you
intend to use the whole word “South Taiwan” as a single noun)
Taiwan and I went with
her
(No need to repeat “My mother”)
.
my mother, I was so happy that I can go to Southern
Taiwan, and so did
was my mother.(Grammar
: I was, and so was her. I did, and so did
her. I can, and so can her.)
On the first day of the
trip,(Trip, not travel)
travel we went to Chen Lake Mountain
Amusement
Park
(Use capital, or big letters, if the words “amusement park” is part
of the actual name of the place) and
we had a wonderful time.(Not
“played very happy”. Say you had a “great” time, a “wonderful” time,
a “fantastic time”. There are many words you can use.)
played very happy, we went
We continued
(“Continue” describes the fact that you
proceeded without stopping) to
Kaohsiung
Kaoshong and went to visit the
night market.,
The
following
(“Next” is okay, but “following” is better)
next day, we went to Kenting
National Park
(The full name is “Kenting
National Park”) and played with
enjoyed ourselves in the ocean.,
and We
visited went to
another night market again, but this one is bigger than
the last one.,
When we
were
(Past tense)
on the way home, my mother told me that she would like to
go
(To “go” because after “to” you will have
to use present tense) went to Southern
Taiwan again in
the Chinese New Year.,
and
She also said
that she very likes
(Grammar) the hotel in the
Kenting,
because
(“because” gives the reasons “why”)
it’s it is
very comfortable.
I think this is a good way
(“Way” is like “method”) thing to relax.,
I like to go to Kenting
again with my mom.,
Southern
Taiwan is a very good place to visit.
