Example Essay on a Trip to Southern Taiwan. Sample Composition Writing on Taiwan Trip

Last tuesday my mother’s company made a travel to South Taiwan and I went with my mother, I was so happy that I can go to South Taiwan and so did my mother.

The first day of the travel we went to Chen Lake Mountain amusement park and played very happy, we went to Kaoshong and went to night market, the next day, we went to Kenting and played with the ocean, and we went to another night market again, but this one is bigger than last one, when we on the way home, my mother told me that she would like to went to South Taiwan in the Chinese New Year, and she also said she very like the hotel in the Kentin, it’s very comfortable.

I think this is a good thing to relax, I like to go again with my mom, south Taiwan is a very good place to visit.

A Trip to Southern Taiwan

 

 

Last Tuesday, my mother’s company had a trip to Southern Taiwan and I went with her. I was so happy that I can go to Southern Taiwan, and so was my mother.

         On the first day of the trip, we went to Chen Lake Mountain Amusement Park and we had a wonderful time. We continued to Kaohsiung and went to visit the night market. The following day, we went to Kenting National Park and enjoyed ourselves in the ocean. We visited another night market again, but this one is bigger than the last one. When we were on the way home, my mother told me that she would like to go to Southern  Taiwan again in the Chinese New Year. She also said that she likes the hotel in Kenting, because it is very comfortable.

          I think this is a good way to relax. I like to go to Kenting again with my mom. Southern Taiwan is a very good place to visit.

   

Travel

A Trip to Southern Taiwan

(Your title is not appropriate. It should be about a “Trip to Southern Taiwan”)

 

Last tuesday (Big “T” for Tuesday) Tuesday, my mother’s company made (You “had” a trip is better. Yes, you can say make a trip because it is not wrong. Just “had” is better) had a trip travel (Not “travel”. Try to use the noun “trip”. You use travel like this : We traveled to …”. You just don’t say we “had a travel”) to Southern (Use “Southern” because it is an adjective that describes Taiwan. “South Taiwan” is not wrong too, if you intend to use the whole word “South Taiwan” as a single noun) Taiwan and I went with her (No need to repeat “My mother”) . my mother, I was so happy that I can go to Southern Taiwan, and so did was my mother.(Grammar : I was, and so was her. I did, and so did her. I can, and so can her.)

 

     On the first day of the trip,(Trip, not travel) travel we went to Chen Lake Mountain Amusement Park (Use capital, or big letters, if the words “amusement park” is part of the actual name of the place) and we had a wonderful time.(Not “played very happy”. Say you had a “great” time, a “wonderful” time, a “fantastic time”. There are many words you can use.) played very happy, we went We continued (“Continue” describes the fact that you proceeded without stopping) to Kaohsiung Kaoshong and went to visit the night market., The following (“Next” is okay, but “following” is better) next day, we went to Kenting National Park (The full name is “Kenting National Park”) and played with enjoyed ourselves in the ocean., and We visited went to another night market again, but this one is bigger than the last one., When we were (Past tense) on the way home, my mother told me that she would like to go (To “go” because after “to” you will have to use present tense) went to Southern Taiwan again in the Chinese New Year., and She also said that she very likes (Grammar) the hotel in the Kenting, because (“because” gives the reasons “why”) it’s it is very comfortable.

     I think this is a good way (“Way” is like “method”) thing to relax., I like to go to Kenting again with my mom., Southern Taiwan is a very good place to visit.

 

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