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Essay on Teddy Bear. Composition Writing on Teddy
Bears
Do you think that Teddy Bear is cute? Many people
think it is, and I am not the exception. I love Teddy Bear, I got
two from my friends’ kindness, one is big and another is small. I
always hold it in my arm and sleep at the same time, it can make me
sleep well.
Some stores in the department store have many Teddy
Bear. They have different kinds of colors and style, some of them
are beautiful (For decoration) and some of them are cute. I know the
things in department stores are a little expensive, but I still like
to shop in it and buy something I like, such as Teddy Bear.
I have many dolls in my home, and all of them are
cute. Though I am such a teenager, I still like little dolls or
something little. Teddy Bear is so attractive that I can’t sleep
without them.
Teddy Bears
Do you think Teddy Bears are cute? Many people
think so, and I am not the exception. I love Teddy Bears. I got two
as gifts from my friends. They are really kind. One is big and
another is small. I always hold it in my arms when I sleep. It can
make me sleep better.
Some department stores have many Teddy Bears for
you to choose from. They are available in different kinds of colors
and styles. Some of them are beautiful and are the perfect items for
decoration. Others are cute. Although I know that things in
department stores are a little expensive, I still like to shop there
and buy things that I like, such as Teddy Bears.
I have many dolls in my home, and all of them
are cute. Though I am already a teenager, I still like little dolls
or things that are little. Teddy Bears are so attractive and I can’t
sleep without them.
Teddy
Bears
Do
you think that (You can use “that” if
you want, but it is not necessary, and definitely not used in
speech) Teddy Bears are
(It must be in the plural because you are
talking not of just ONE teddy bear) is cute? Many
people think so,
(“Think so” means “agree” with the original
idea) it is, and I am not the exception.
(Very good here… “I am not the
exception” is a good expression) I love Teddy Bears.
, I got two as gifts
(“As gifts” meaning “in the form of
gifts”) from my friends. They are
really kind. (The “kindness” part
is better placed in a new sentence)
kindness, One
is big and another is small. I always hold it in my arms
and (Not “and” but “when” because
“sleeping” is the first motivation here, and holding the teddy bear
is secondary. When you use “and”, the two events, sleeping and
holding, becomes of equal priority)
when I sleep.
at the same time, It
can make me sleep better.
(Not “well” because you feel “well” when you
are NOT sick. Her, you are feeling better) well.
Some stores in the (No need for
“stores in the department stores) department stores
have many Teddy Bear for you to choose
from. (“To choose from” meaning
you can pick and select from a wide variety of choices). They
have are available in
(“Available in” means “having” are “there
for you to choose from”) different kinds of colors and styles.,
Some of them are beautiful
and are the perfect items for decoration.
(“Perfect” means “the best there
is for a specific purpose”) (For decoration) and some of
them Others are cute.
Although I know
that the things in department stores are a little
expensive, but (Since we used
“although” earlier, grammar rules forbid the using of “but” later in
the sentence) I still like to shop in it
there and buy something
(NOT “somethings”. That is okay if you are
writing in Chinese) things that
I like, such as Teddy Bears.
I
have many dolls in my home, and all of them are cute. Though I am
such already
(“Already” meaning “is, as of the
present moment”) a teenager, I still like little dolls or
something things that are
little. Teddy Bears are
is so attractive that and
I can’t sleep without them.
