Essay on Teddy Bear. Composition Writing on Teddy Bears

Do you think that Teddy Bear is cute? Many people think it is, and I am not the exception. I love Teddy Bear, I got two from my friends’ kindness, one is big and another is small. I always hold it in my arm and sleep at the same time, it can make me sleep well.

Some stores in the department store have many Teddy Bear. They have different kinds of colors and style, some of them are beautiful (For decoration) and some of them are cute. I know the things in department stores are a little expensive, but I still like to shop in it and buy something I like, such as Teddy Bear.

I have many dolls in my home, and all of them are cute. Though I am such a teenager, I still like little dolls or something little. Teddy Bear is so attractive that I can’t sleep without them.

Teddy Bears

 

     Do you think Teddy Bears are cute? Many people think so, and I am not the exception. I love Teddy Bears. I got two as gifts from my friends. They are really kind. One is big and another is small. I always hold it in my arms when I sleep. It can make me sleep better.

 

     Some department stores have many Teddy Bears for you to choose from. They are available in different kinds of colors and styles. Some of them are beautiful and are the perfect items for decoration. Others are cute.  Although I know that things in department stores are a little expensive, I still like to shop there and buy things that I like, such as Teddy Bears.

 

     I have many dolls in my home, and all of them are cute. Though I am already a teenager, I still like little dolls or things that are little. Teddy Bears are so attractive and I can’t sleep without them.

 

Teddy Bears

 

     Do you think that (You can use “that” if you want, but it is not necessary, and definitely not used in speech) Teddy Bears are (It must be in the plural because you are talking not of just ONE teddy bear)  is cute? Many people think so, (“Think so” means “agree” with the original idea) it is, and I am not the exception. (Very good here… “I am not the exception” is a good expression) I love Teddy Bears. , I got two as gifts (“As gifts” meaning “in the form of gifts”) from my friends. They are really kind. (The “kindness” part is better placed in a new sentence) kindness, One is big and another is small. I always hold it in my arms and (Not “and” but “when” because “sleeping” is the first motivation here, and holding the teddy bear is secondary. When you use “and”, the two events, sleeping and holding, becomes of equal priority) when I sleep. at the same time, It can make me sleep better. (Not “well” because you feel “well” when you are NOT sick. Her, you are feeling better)  well.

 

     Some stores in the (No need for “stores in the department stores) department stores have many Teddy Bear for you to choose from. (“To choose from” meaning you can pick and select from a wide variety of choices). They have are available in (“Available in” means “having” are “there for you to choose from”) different kinds of colors and styles., Some of them are beautiful and are the perfect items for decoration. (“Perfect” means “the best there is for a specific purpose”) (For decoration) and some of them Others are cute. Although I know that the things in department stores are a little expensive, but (Since we used “although” earlier, grammar rules forbid the using of “but” later in the sentence) I still like to shop in it there and buy something (NOT “somethings”. That is okay if you are writing in Chinese) things that I like, such as Teddy Bears.

 

     I have many dolls in my home, and all of them are cute. Though I am such already (“Already” meaning “is, as of the present moment”) a teenager, I still like little dolls or something things that are little. Teddy Bears are is so attractive that and I can’t sleep without them.

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