Sample Essay on Technology. Composition Writing Example on Technology

Technology have become one part of our life, there are more and more people have computer in their home, more and more people have cell phone on their hand, I have one, too.

In the past, people do many things by their hand, but they use computer, cell phone, internet…to instead hand, people become lazy and lazy, some of people even use computer to do all thing that they want. Cell phone in the beginning is black and big, but now they become small and colorful, some cell phone can surf the internet, some can play games ,some can receive e-mail, all on their cell phone. I have one cell phone, too, it’s Nokia 6108 I bought it from me friend, he has a cell phone which can take pictures, I very like cell phone can take pictures, if I have money I’ll buy one for myself.

After all, technology is not always good, some is bad, so people should think whether they really want to buy one thing.

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Technology has become a part of our lives. There are more and more people having computers in their homes, and more and more people own cell phones. I am not the exception. 

In the past, people do many things manually, but now they use computers, cell phones and the internet instead. People are becoming lazier. Some people even use computers to do all the things that they want to do. The earlier generation of cell phones are black and big, but now they have become smaller and more colorful.  Some cell phone can be used to surf the internet, and some of them have games. Others can be used to receive e-mails. I have one cell phone, too. It’s a Nokia 6108. I bought it from my friend. He has a newer cell phone which can take pictures. I like cell phones that can take pictures. If I have money, I’ll buy one for myself.

Technology is not always good, because some of it is bad. People should think carefully before they decide to buy anything.

Technology

Technology have has (“has” because “technology” is a singular noun) become one a (We always say “a” part) part of our lives life.(“Our” is more than one, so use the plural form of life) ,There are more and more people having (This is about grammar) have computers (More than one computer definitely) in their homes, and more and more people have own (“Own” means “having” or “taking possession of”) cell phones. I am not the exception.  on their hand, I have one, too. (“exception” means “to be different from the rest)

In the past, people do many things manually,(“manual” means “by hand” or “not automated”) by their hand, but now (Use the distinction “now” to emphasize that it is not “before”) they use computers, cell phones and the internet to instead. hand, People are becoming lazier.(You can say “lazier and lazier”, but do not overuse the style of “… and …” because you have already used “more and more” just now) and lazy, Some of people even use computers to do all the things that they want to do. . The earlier generation (“early generation” means the first series of a product) of cell phones in the beginning is are black and big, but now they have become smaller (“smaller” is comparative, to be used here because you are comparing with the past) and more colorful., Some cell phone can be used to (“cell phones” cannot surf the internet, because they are not “living”. However, they can be used to “surf the internet”) surf the internet, and, some of them have can play (Same as before, cellphones cannot play games, but can be used to play games) games. ,some Others can be used to receive e-mails., all on their cell phone. I have one cell phone, too., It’s a Nokia 6108. I bought it from me my (grammar problem) friend., He has a newer (I assume he has got a newer cellphone) cell phone which can take pictures., I very like (Don’t say “very like” because it is wrong) cell phones that can take pictures., If I have money, I’ll buy one for myself.

After all, Technology is not always good, because (“because” adds the reason to what you have said) some of it is bad., so People should think carefully before (It is about thinking carefully before making a decision) whether they really want decide to buy one thing. anything.

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Sample Essay on Technology. Composition Writing Example on Technology