Sample Essay on Summer. Example Composition Writing on Summer

Summer, which is the hottest weather in four seasons. In summer, many people likes to go to the beach, and swimming in the ocean, I like to swim inn the swimming pool, because I just think that swim in the ocean is more dangerous than in a swimming pool.

In summer, I like to stay home and turn on the air condition to relax; stay in an air condition room is very good. I like to eat watermelon and some cold fruit in summer, because that can make me cool down, summer also has a nice holiday that we have not to go to school.

Summer is not only hot but also rain a lot, there are many typhoons come in summer, every one can bring a lot water, some people can’t go home just because it rains to big, so we have to pay attention when typhoon comes.

Summer

 
Summer, has the hottest weather in the four seasons. In summer, many people like to go to the beach, or swim in the ocean. As for me, I like to swim in the swimming pool, because I think that swimming in the ocean is more dangerous.

In summer, I like to stay home and turn on the air conditioner to relax. Staying in an air conditioned room is very comfortable. I like to eat watermelons and some cold fruits during the summer, because that can cool me down. Summer vacation is also a good time because we do not have to go to school.

Summer is not only hot, but it rains a lot as well. Summer is also the typhoon season, and every typhoon brings a lot rain and disasters. Some people get stranded because of the heavy rain. So, we have to take precautions before the typhoon comes.

Summer

Summer, which is (“Summer has” and not “summer which is”. However, you can say “Summer, which is in July”. Hope you can see the difference) has the hottest weather in the four seasons. In summer, many people likes (“People” is plural, so the verb has no “s”) to go to the beach, and (“and” is okay, but “or” is better)  or swimming (“To swim” because you used the word “to” before.) in the ocean., As for me, (“As for me means “Where I am concerned, or “In my opinion) I like to swim inn the swimming pool, because I just think that swimming (Same mistake, because you used the word “to”) in the ocean is more dangerous. than in a swimming pool. (No need to repeat the part about “swimming pool” because you have already said that before)

In summer, I like to stay home and turn on the air conditioner (“Air condition” is an adjective, like “air-conditioned room”. The noun is “air conditioner”) to relax.; Staying in an air conditioned room is very comfortable. (What do you mean by “good”, because “good” has different interpretations. Comfortable is a better choice) good. I like to eat watermelons (Use the plural form)  and some cold fruits during the (You know the word “during”. Use it)  in summer, because that can make me cool me down.(“Cool me down” and not “make me cool”. A new pair of Nike shoes will “make you look cool), Summer vacation is (Here, you are talking about the “vacation”) also has a good time nice holiday that because (Use “because” to link you ideas) we do not have not to go to school.

Summer is not only hot, but it also rains a lot as well.(“As well” means “too”)  , there are many typhoons come in summer, Summer is also the typhoon season,(You know what “typhoon season” means) and every one can typhoon brings a lot rain and disasters.(“Disaster” means “calamity”) water, Some people get stranded (“Stranded” means you cannot go anywhere, like “stranded in an elevator” or “stranded in a traffic jam”) can’t go home just because of the heavy rain.(“Heavy rain” and NOT “big raion”) it rains to big, So, we have to take precautions before the (“Taking precautions” means to be extra careful, or cautious) pay attention when typhoon comes.

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