Example Essay on Being Singers. Sample Composition Writing on Being a Singer

There are many and many singers in Taiwan, boys, girls, even groups, I like Jay the most, he sings really well, and he make song by himself, now his CDs is very popular.

My sister didn’t like jay, because he has a girl friend that is not his real girl friend Jolin, my sister like Jolin so she didn’t like Jay, anyway, I don’t like Jolin, too. When I was little I wanted to be a singer, because I think singer is really easy to make much money, and they can sang a lot of songs, but it is not really so easy that what I think, singers have to do a lot of things one day, and they always have to smile at their fans, that’s to hard.

Now I don’t want to be a singer, because I don’t want to that me tired every day, now I just have to be a good student and study hard is ok.



Singers
 

There are many singers in Taiwan. Male and female singers, and even groups. I like Jay the most, because he sings really well, and he wrote the songs by himself. Now, his CDs are very popular. My sister doesn’t like Jay, because he has a girlfriend.

 Although she is not really his girlfriend. Her name is Jolin. My sister likes Jolin, so she doesn’t like Jay anyway. I don’t like Jolin.

When I was little, I wanted to be a singer because I think singers can make a lot of money, and they can sing a lot of songs. However, I realized it is not really as easy as I thought.  Singers have to do a lot of things in one day, and they always have to put on a smile for their fans. That is not an easy thing to do.

Now, I don’t want to be a singer anymore, because I don’t want to be tired every day. Now, I just want to study hard and be a good student.  

Singers 

There are many and many (don’t say “many and many” because it is wrong. You can say “more and morte”) singers in Taiwan., boys, girls, Male and female singers, and (Not “boys and girls” but “males and females”) even groups., I like Jay the most, because (“because” explains the reasons why) he sings really well, and he make (You “write” songs and not “make” them)  wrote the songs by himself., Now, his CDs are is (More than one CD, so it must be “are”) very popular.

My sister doesn’t (“doesn’t” is for present tense, and it is correct becausebelieve that she still does not like him now) didn’t like Jay, because he has a girlfriend. that Although she (“although” is the same as “even though”) is not really his real girlfriend. Her name is (Tell that she has a name) Jolin., My sister likes (“Sister” is singular, so add an “s”) Jolin, so she doesn’t (“Again” that should be “doesn’t”)  didn’t like Jay anyway. , I don’t like Jolin, too. (“Too” because you are having the same feeling as her.) When I was little, I wanted to be a singer because I think singers is really easy to can make a lot of much money, and they can sing a lot of songs. , but However,Never use “but” at the beginning of a sentence I realized (“realized” means “finding out” or “beginning to understand”) it is not really as so easy as (This is the common expression of “as...as”. For example : as fast as, as good as, as easy as and so on) that what I thought. (“Thought” because it must be in the past tense”) think, Singers have to do a lot of things in one day, and they always have to put on a (To “put on a smile” means to “try to appear cheerful”) smile for at (You smile “for” someone, NOT “at”) their fans., That is not an easy thing to do. that’s to hard. (It would be a better expression to say that something is “not easy” than “that’s too hard”)

Now, I don’t want to be a singer anymore,(“Anymore” meaning “henceforth” or “from now on” as used in this context) because I don’t want to that me be (To “be” tired, or “be” hungry)  tired every day., Now, I just want have to study hard and Be a good student is rather subjective. You would rather say specifically what you mean by that. So, saying that you will “study hard” is a good way to express yourselfbe a good student. and study hard. is ok.

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