Essay on I Would like to be a Singer. Composition Writing Sample on Being a Singer

I like singer, because the singer can sing a very good’s song. They sing’s song all are very beautiful.

I have some singer is my favorite like; Avirl, Backstreet Boy, Britney, Celin-Dion, Mariah-Carey, Jennifer-Lopez, Faith-Hill, and so on,

They all are a good singer, and the singer can go to sing in a performance,

I like to get to sing in a performance. If you are a singer, you will have a good treatment really. Sing can get a lot latter and gift from the fins, oh~that are so good to get that.

I like to be a singer, because the singer can get a lot money, I like to be a singer, I want to be a singer.


I like to be a Singer

 

I like singers, because they all have beautiful voices. Their songs are all very beautiful.

I have some favorite singers, like Avirl, Backstreet Boy, Britney, Celin-Dion, Mariah-Carey, Jennifer-Lopez, Faith-Hill, and so on. They are all good singers, and singers often have to sing in a performance.

I like to get to sing in a performance, too. If you are a singer, you will be well liked. Singers can receive a lot of fan mails and gifts from their fans.  Oh ~ that would be so great.

I like to be a singer, because singers can earn a lot of money. I like to be a singer, and I want to be a singer.

I like to be a Singer

I like singers, (Use the plural noun, because surely there are more than one singer that you like) because they all have beautiful voices.(“beautiful” is a better word to describe voice than “good”) singer can sing a very good’s song. They sing’s song all Their songs are all very beautiful. (Just say their songs are beautiful)

I have some favorite (“favorite singers” and not “singer is my favorite like”) singers, is my favorite like; Avirl, Backstreet Boy, Britney, Celin-Dion, Mariah-Carey, Jennifer-Lopez, Faith-Hill, and so on, They all are all (“are all good” and not “all are good”) a good singers, and the singers often have (“often have to go…” is better than “can go…” because “often” tells you more about the frequency that it happens. “Can” only tells you that they “have to”) can go to sing in a performance.

I like to get to sing in a performance, too.(“too” because you wish to be like them) If you are a singer, you will be well liked. (“well liked” means “well treated” or “popular”) have a good treatment really. Singers can receive (“receive” means to “get”)  get a lot of fan mails (“fan mails” are letters from fans) latter and gifts from their fans., Oh~that are so would be so great. good to get that. (“would be so great” tells the reader that it is “assumptive”, meaning “assuming that your dream actually took place”. Remember that “would” is often used to indicate things that could happen, but may not really or actually have happened)

I like to be a singer, because the singers can (“earn” is better than “get”. “Earn money” is “making money”) earn get a lot of money., I like to be a singer, and I want to be a singer.

 

 

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