Essay on Shopping. Composition Writing Sample on
Shopping
Many people like to go shopping, and so do I .
My mom likes go shopping, and so do my sisters , they all like to
buy clothes and pants, one time, my mother told me that I should go
shopping with her, then I go, but when I go home I make a decision
that I will not go shopping with my mother because she always watch
this and watch that.
If I go shopping, I always buy things quickly
and usefully, yesterday I went to department store to buy jeans and
I just looked one that I really loved, then I bought it right away,
and that didn’t take many times from me.
shopping is not only buy but also look some fashion things, some
people just go shopping by watching things not buying things.
Shopping
Many people like to go shopping, and so do I. My mom
likes to go shopping too, and my sisters are no different. They all
like to buy clothes and pants. Once, my mother told me that I should
go shopping with her, and so I did. However, after I got home, I
made a decision that I will not go shopping with her anymore because
she always takes a long time browsing the stores.
When I go shopping, I always buy the things I want
quickly, Yesterday, I went to a department store to buy jeans and I
saw one that I really loved. Then I bought it right away, and that
didn’t take me a lot of time.
We shop not only to buy things, but also to look at
some fashionable items. Some people just go shopping to look at
things, not buying them. This is what we call window shopping.
Shopping
Many
people like to go shopping, and so do I. My mom likes
to
(Grammar here. “I like to play, NOT I like play)
go shopping too,(“Too”
because she likes it as well) and
my sisters are no different. (“No
different” has the same meaning as “too” or “the same”) so
do my sisters , They all
like to buy clothes and pants.,
one time,(Do not use “one time”. Use
“Once”) Once, my
mother told me that I should go shopping with her,
and so I did.
(“and so I did” is the same as saying that
you did what you were asked to do here) then I go,
but However,
(“However” gives meaning to the fact that you felt differently after
you went there) after
when I go got
(Past tense) home,
I made
(Past tense) a decision that I will
not go shopping with her anymore
(“anymore” means “never, ever again”.
Example, I do not want to eat junk food anymore) my mother
because she always takes a long time
browsing the stores. watch this and watch that.
(“Taking a long time
browsing” means spending too much time looking around, and not
buying anything. Browsing means “looking around” as in “browsing the
internet” or “browsing around the bookstore”)
If
When
(Not “If” but “When”, because you are saying “whenever”. “If” means
that you may NOT go, but surely you go sometimes) I go
shopping, I always buy the
things I want quickly.,
and usefully, (“Usefully” hdoes not
make sense here) Yesterday,
I went to a department store
to buy jeans and I saw
just looked (You do not “look one” but
“saw one”. I saw one bird this morning, and not LOOK) one
that I really loved.,
Then I bought it right away, and
that didn’t take me a lot of time.
many times from me. (“many
times” is wrong, because time is an uncountable noun)
shopping is
We shop
(Grammar) not only
to buy
things, but also
to look
at some fashionable
(Use the adjective to describe a
noun, as in fashionable here, and NOT fashion)
items.
(“items” are the same a sthings. You used the word “thing” too many
times already) things, Some
people just go shopping to look at
by watching (You watch television,
and NOT the things in a department store) things,
not buying them.
(“them” here refers also again to “things”. Try to use different
words of the same meaning so that your essay will not be boring. You
are not wrong though) things.
This is what we call window
shopping.
(“window shopping” is a term referring to shopping
and looking around, but NOT buying anything.)
