Essay on Shopping. Composition Writing Sample on Shopping

     Many people like to go shopping, and so do I . My mom likes go shopping, and so do my sisters , they all like to buy clothes and pants, one time, my mother told me that I should go shopping with her, then I go, but when I go home I make a decision that I will not go shopping with my mother because she always watch this and watch that.

     If I go shopping, I always buy things quickly and usefully, yesterday I went to department store to buy jeans and I just looked one that I really loved, then I bought it right away, and that didn’t take many times from me. 
shopping is not only buy but also look some fashion things, some people just go shopping by watching things not buying things. 

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Many people like to go shopping, and so do I. My mom likes to go shopping too, and my sisters are no different. They all like to buy clothes and pants. Once, my mother told me that I should go shopping with her, and so I did. However, after I got home, I made a decision that I will not go shopping with her anymore because she always takes a long time browsing the stores.

When I go shopping, I always buy the things I want quickly, Yesterday, I went to a department store to buy jeans and I saw one that I really loved. Then I bought it right away, and that didn’t take me a lot of time.

We shop not only to buy things, but also to look at some fashionable items. Some people just go shopping to look at things, not buying them. This is what we call window shopping.

  

Shopping

 

Many people like to go shopping, and so do I. My mom likes to (Grammar here. “I like to play, NOT I like play) go shopping too,(“Too” because she likes it as well) and my sisters are no different. (“No different” has the same meaning as “too” or “the same”) so do my sisters , They all like to buy clothes and pants., one time,(Do not use “one time”. Use “Once”) Once, my mother told me that I should go shopping with her, and so I did. (“and so I did” is the same as saying that you did what you were asked to do here)  then I go, but However, (“However” gives meaning to the fact that you felt differently after you went there) after when I go got (Past tense) home, I made (Past tense) a decision that I will not go shopping with her anymore (“anymore” means “never, ever again”. Example, I do not want to eat junk food anymore) my mother because she always takes a long time browsing the stores. watch this and watch that. (“Taking a long time browsing” means spending too much time looking around, and not buying anything. Browsing means “looking around” as in “browsing the internet” or “browsing around the bookstore”)

If When (Not “If” but “When”, because you are saying “whenever”. “If” means that you may NOT go, but surely you go sometimes) I go shopping, I always buy the things I want quickly., and usefully, (“Usefully” hdoes not make sense here) Yesterday, I went to a department store to buy jeans and I saw just looked (You do not “look one” but “saw one”. I saw one bird this morning, and not LOOK) one that I really loved., Then I bought it right away, and that didn’t take me a lot of time. many times from me. (“many times” is wrong, because time is an uncountable noun)
     shopping is We shop (Grammar) not only to buy things, but also to look at some fashionable (Use the adjective to describe a noun, as in fashionable here, and NOT fashion) items. (“items” are the same a sthings. You used the word “thing” too many times already) things, Some people just go shopping to look at by watching (You watch television, and NOT the things in a department store) things, not buying them. (“them” here refers also again to “things”. Try to use different words of the same meaning so that your essay will not be boring. You are not wrong though)  things.
This is what we call window shopping.

(“window shopping” is a term referring to shopping and looking around, but NOT buying anything.)

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