Sample Essay on Pets. Example Composition Writing about Pets

Many people like to keep animals as their pets, I want to keep pets, too, I wish I could have a puppy, dog is one kind of friends to people, dog is very loyal, before I went to junior high school, I have a puppy, and I like him very much, I always take him to take a walk, one day my mom told me that my puppy had been send to the other, I feel so sad, and I miss my puppy very much, I ask my mom why she did that, she said we live in an apartment, and if we keep dog we may disturb neighbor. I make a wish when my mother told me that, I wish when I grow up, I must live myself and I will keep puppies, I can take care of them by myself.

I don’t like cats because cats let me feel uncomfortable and I feel that cats always dangerous.

Pets

 

Many people like to keep animals as their pets, so do I. I wish I could have a little puppy. Dogs are man’s best friends because they are very loyal. Before, when I was in junior high school, I had a puppy, and I liked him very much. I always took him to walks. One day, my mom told me that my puppy had been given away. I felt so sad, and I missed my puppy very much. I asked my mom why she did that, and she said that because we are living in an apartment, keeping a dog may disturb the neighbors. I made a wish when my mother told me that. I wish that when I grow up, I can live by myself and I will keep puppies. I will be able to take care of them by myself.

 

I don’t like cats because cats make me feel uncomfortable and I feel that cats are always dangerous.

Pets

Many people like to keep animals as their pets, so do I. (“So do I” means “me too”. You do not need to repeat the idea again. Just use “So do I”) I want to keep pets, too, I wish I could have a little (Use adjectives as often as you can, “little” describes in more detail about the pet) puppy., Dogs
(Plural, because surely, there is more than one dogs we are talking about) are man’s best friends because (“Dogs being man’s best friend” is a common expression about the closeness between man and dogs) is one kind of friends to people, dog is they are (They, because we are talking about more than one dog) very loyal., Before, when I was in (Not when you “went” to junior high”. “Went” is like “going to school” which you do everyday. You were “in” junior high that time) went to junior high school, I had (Past tense) have a puppy, and I liked him very much., I always took (Past tense) take him to take a walks.,(You take a pet for walks, or you can say you “walk the dog”) One day, my mom told me that my puppy had been (“Given away” means given to other people. Not “send to the other”) given away. send to the other, I feel felt (Past tense) so sad, and I missed (Past tense) my puppy very much., I asked (Past tense) my mom why she did that, and she said that because (“Because” explains the meaning behind what you have said) we are living (“continuous tense” because you were and still are living in an apartment) live in an apartment, and if we keeping a dog we may disturb the neighbors (Surely more thanone neighbor). I made (Past tense) a wish when my mother told me that., I wish that when I grow up, I must can (Must is not wrong. Can is better) live by myself and I will keep puppies., I can will be able to (“Will be able to” meaning that you “will have the opportunity to” do something) take care of them by myself.

I don’t like cats because cats make (Common mistake. Not let, but made. Examples (let) : Let me help you. Let me try again. Let us watch a movie. (Make): Don’t make me angry. He mad me feel disgusted) let me feel uncomfortable and I feel that cats are always dangerous

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