Essay Example on New school. Composition Sample Writing on New School

After junior high school, I am going to be a senior high school student. I feel very excited that how is new school like and how many friends I will meet. At this time I feel I grow up and I feel that I have to be an independent guy, I think I have to study more hard in senior high school than in junior high, there are many different subjects in the new school most of them are difficult and I think that is why I have to study hard.

There are many different things in senior high, the biggest different is that new school is much bigger than junior high, my old friend only one is at this new school, we are best friend and other friend I think we are friend forever, after senior high I am going to collage and if I want to go to a good collage, I have to be very good guy in the school.

New School


After graduating from junior high, I am going to be a senior high school student. I feel very excited to find out how the new school is like and how many friends I will meet. At this time, I feel that I have grown up and I also feel that I have to learn to be independent. I think I will have to study harder than before in senior high. There are many different subjects in the new school and most of them are difficult. That is why I have to study harder than ever.

I see a lot of differences in my new school, and the biggest difference is the new school is much bigger than my former school. One of my former classmates is also at this new school, and we are the best of friends. I think we will be lifelong friends. After senior high, I will go to college, and if I want to enter a good college, I will have to do well in my studies.

New school

 After graduating from (I think you know the word “graduate”, so use it) junior high, (No need for the word “school”, not necessary, but not wrong though) school, I am going to be a senior high school student. I feel very excited (“To find out” tells that you wish to discover something) to find out that how the is new school is (Grammar problem) like and how many friends I will meet. At this time, I feel that (Grammar here) I have grown (“Have grown, as in “have taken” and so on) up and I also (Add “also” because you are adding a new idea) feel that I have to learn to (“To be an independent” is okay, but “learning to be…” tells more about the challenges you face) be an independent. guy, (“Guy” is not a good word. Try “student”) I think I will (“will” because you have not as yet) have to study more (Not “more harder”, but harder. “Hard, harder, hardest) harder than before (“Than before” is better, than having to repeat the same words “junior or senior high) in senior high.  school than in junior high, There are many different subjects in the new school and (Join the ideas) most of them are difficult. and I think That is why I have to study harder than ever. (“Harder than ever” means putting in more effort than you have done before)

There are many different things in senior high, I see a lot of differences in my new school, (“Many different things” is okay, but “things” is very Chinese in expression. “Lots of differences” is better”) and the biggest different is that the new school is much bigger than (“former” means “before”, as in your “former classmates”, “former teachers” and so on) my former school. junior high, One of my former classmates is also (“One of …” refers to that one among the many classmates that you have) my old friend only one is at this new school, and we are the best of friends.(“Best of friends” means the best among your friends) I think we will be lifelong friends. (“Lifelong” means forever, or till the end of days) and other friend I think we are friend forever, After senior high, I am going (“will” because it has not yet happened) will go to college, (Spelling mistake) and if I want to go to enter (“Go to” is okay, but “enter” is better) a good college, I will have to (“Do well in my studies” says it all. Being a “good guy” can mean many things) do well in my studies. be a very good guy in the school.

 

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