Example Essay on New class. Sample Composition Writing on New Class

I am a new student of the new school, and I am going to be a new student. What teacher am I going to meet? What classmate am I going to meet?

In my new class, I was a person that no bodies knew me. Can I be a good student? Can I be a good friend? I had no idea with it. I don’t like to study, but I have to study, because if I don’t study I will get a very bad grade on my test.

I was so exciting of my new class; I want to see if my new class will have some people that I was knew. 

New Class

I am a new student in my new school, and I am going to be making many new friends. Who is going to be my new teacher, and who are going to be my new classmates?

In my new class, I am a stranger to everybody. Will I be a good student? Will I be a good friend? I have no ideas. I don’t like to study. However, I have to study because if I don’t, I will get very bad grades on my tests.

I am so excited about my new class. I want to see if my new class will have some familiar faces that I was knew. 

New class

I am a new student of the in my (“of my” is not wrong, but “in my” is definitely better) new school, and I am going to be making many new friends.(You are repeating the same thing about “new student”, so it would be better to say something else, like “making new friends) to be a new student. What (Not “what” but “who”, because we are referring to people) Who is going to be (“going to be" because as of now, she is not yet your teacher) my new teacher, am I going to meet? What (“who” again for classmates, because they are people and not things) and who are going to be my new classmates? am I going to meet?

In my new class, I am a stranger to everybody. (When nobody knows you, that is when you are a “stranger” to them) I was a person that no bodies knew me. Can Will (Not “can” but “will”, because you, of course, “can” be a good student, but “will” you be one, is another matter) I be a good student? Can Will I be a good friend? I had have (Not “had” because you should use present tense) no ideas. (Always use plural nouns when you are saying “No”, like “no apples) with it. I don’t like to study., but However, I have to study because if I don’t, study (No need to repeat the word “study”) I will get a very bad grades (“grades” must have the “s” because you will definitely have more than one “grade”) on my tests. (More than one test ?)

I was am (Not “was” because you are not speaking tin the past) so exciting of (“excited” is not the
same as “exciting” in this case. If you say you are “exciting”, it means that you are a very interesting person, and fun to be with)
excited about my new class. ; I want to see if my new class will have some people (“familiar facxes” are faces or people that you already know) familiar faces
that I was knew. 

 

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