Example Essay on New class. Sample Composition
Writing on New Class
I am a new student of the new school, and I am going
to be a new student. What teacher am I going to meet? What classmate
am I going to meet?
In my new class, I was a person that no bodies knew
me. Can I be a good student? Can I be a good friend? I had no idea
with it. I don’t like to study, but I have to study, because if I
don’t study I will get a very bad grade on my test.
I was so exciting of my new class; I want to see if
my new class will have some people that I was knew.
New Class
I am a new student in my new school, and I am going
to be making many new friends. Who is going to be my new teacher,
and who are going to be my new classmates?
In my new class, I am a stranger to everybody. Will I
be a good student? Will I be a good friend? I have no ideas. I don’t
like to study. However, I have to study because if I don’t, I will
get very bad grades on my tests.
I am so excited about my new class. I want to see if
my new class will have some familiar faces that I was knew.
New class
I am a new student of the
in my
(“of my” is not wrong, but “in my” is definitely better)
new
school, and I am going to be making many new friends.(You
are repeating the same thing about “new student”, so it would be
better to say something else, like “making new friends)
to be a new student. What
(Not “what”
but “who”, because we are referring to people)
Who is going to be
(“going to be" because as of now, she is not yet your teacher)
my
new
teacher,
am I going to meet? What
(“who” again
for classmates, because they are people and not things)
and who are
going to be my new
classmates?
am I going to meet?
In my new class, I am a stranger to everybody.
(When nobody knows you, that is when you are a “stranger” to them) I was a person that no bodies knew me. Can
Will (Not “can” but “will”, because you, of course, “can” be a good
student, but “will” you be one, is another matter)
I be a
good student? Can
Will
I be
a good friend? I had
have
(Not “had” because you should use present tense)
no ideas.
(Always use plural nouns when you are saying “No”, like “no apples)
with it. I don’t like to study., but
However,
I have to
study because if I don’t,
study
(No need to
repeat the word “study”)
I will
get a very bad grades
(“grades” must have the “s” because you will definitely have more
than one “grade”)
on my
tests.
(More than one test ?)
I was
am
(Not
“was” because you are not speaking tin the past)
so
exciting of
(“excited” is
not the
same as “exciting” in this case. If you say you are “exciting”, it
means that you are a very interesting person, and fun to be with)
excited about
my new class.
; I want
to see if my new class will have some people
(“familiar
facxes” are faces or people that you already know)
familiar
faces
that I was knew.
