Example Essay on NBA. Sample Composition Writing on NBA. Basketball Essay

This is my second essay. I will talk about some teams I like and some teams I don’t like.

My favorite team is New Jersey Nets, however they didn’t play very well in the play off game, but I believe that they will be better in the next season .Jason Kidd is one of my favorite player in the NBA, I think he is the best backfielder and no one can be better than he, in the beginning of 2004 season, New Jersey Nets exchanged some player to another teams, one of them is called Martin is a good player, too.

I don’t like L.A. Lakers. I think they are too arrogant, but they really did well in the 2004 game. I don’t like Kobe Bryant the most, I think basketball is a team game, not just one person game, but that just me fell, there are many people like he.

I think NBA is a good TV program, I learn many basketball rules in the NBA. There is one basketball game in Taiwan, but it is worse than NBA, by the way do you watch NBA? Which team is your favorite?

 

NBA

This is my second essay, and I will write about the NBA basketball teams that I like and those that I don’t like.

My favorite team is New Jersey Nets, even though they didn’t play very well in the play off game. I am confident that they will perform better in the next season. Jason Kidd is one of my favorite players in the NBA, and I think he is the best backfielder because no one is better than him. In the beginning of the 2004 season, New Jersey Nets exchanged some players with other teams. One of them is called Martin, who is a good player, too.

I don’t like L.A. Lakers because I think they are too arrogant, although they really did well in the 2004 game. I don’t like Kobe Bryant the most. I think basketball is a game that requires team spirit, and not just one person should try to dominate the game. It is disappointing to me that many people like him.

I think NBA is a good TV program. I have learned many basketball skills from watching that program. We have one famous basketball team in Taiwan, but it is worse than the NBA teams.  By the way, do you watch the NBA? Which team is your favorite?

NBA

This is my second essay, and (“and” to connect your ideas) I will talk (You are writing, not talking) write about some the NBA basketball (Do not presume that the reader understands what you are saying. So, mention “basketball” to be sure) teams that I like and those that (“and those that…” replaces repeating the word “teams”)  some teams I don’t like.

My favorite team is New Jersey Nets, even though (“However” is not wrong, but even though is better) however they didn’t play very well in the play off game., but I believe am confident (“confident” means believing in things that has not yet happened) that they will be perform (“perform” means “to show one’s abilities)  better in the next season. Jason Kidd is one of my favorite players (When you use “one of…” then the noun that follows must be plural)  in the NBA, and I think he is the best backfielder and because (“because” explains the reason behind what you have said) no one can be (“No one can be” effectively means that it is impossible, but I think nothing can be impossible. “No one is” means that at this moment, we do not have anyone that good) is better than him.(Grammar problem)  he, In the beginning of the 2004 season, New Jersey Nets exchanged some players (“some” must be followed by a plural noun) to with another teams., One of them is called Martin, who is a good player, too.

I don’t like L.A. Lakers because (“because” explains the reasons) I think they are too arrogant, but although they really did well in the 2004 game. I don’t like Kobe Bryant the most., I think basketball is a team game that requires team spirit,(“Team spirit” means the ability to work together as a team) and not just one person should try to dominate the (“dominating” means trying to control or trying to be the star of the show) game., but that just me fell, It is disappointing to me that (“disappointing” means the feeling of despair when thing do not turn out the way you expect it to)  there are many people like him. he.

I think NBA is a good TV program., I have learned many basketball skills from watching that program.(You learned the skills, not the rules I think) rules in the NBA. There is We have one famous basketball (I presume you are talking about one of the teams locally) game team in Taiwan, but it is worse than the NBA teams.,(Comparing teams, and not TV programs, I guess)

 By the way, do you watch the NBA? Which team is your favorite?

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