Example Essay on NBA. Sample Composition Writing on
NBA. Basketball Essay
This is my second essay. I will talk about some teams
I like and some teams I don’t like.
My favorite team is New Jersey Nets, however they
didn’t play very well in the play off game, but I believe that they
will be better in the next season .Jason Kidd is one of my favorite
player in the NBA, I think he is the best backfielder and no one can
be better than he, in the beginning of 2004 season, New Jersey Nets
exchanged some player to another teams, one of them is called Martin
is a good player, too.
I don’t like L.A. Lakers. I think they are too
arrogant, but they really did well in the 2004 game. I don’t like
Kobe Bryant the most, I think basketball is a team game, not just
one person game, but that just me fell, there are many people like
he.
I think NBA is a good TV program, I learn many
basketball rules in the NBA. There is one basketball game in Taiwan,
but it is worse than NBA, by the way do you watch NBA? Which team is
your favorite?
NBA
This is my second essay, and I will write about the
NBA basketball teams that I like and those that I don’t like.
My
favorite team is New Jersey Nets, even though they didn’t play very
well in the play off game. I am confident that they will perform
better in the next season. Jason Kidd is one of my favorite players
in the NBA, and I think he is the best backfielder because no one is
better than him. In the beginning of the 2004 season, New Jersey
Nets exchanged some players with other teams. One of them is called
Martin, who is a good player, too.
I don’t like L.A. Lakers because I think
they are too arrogant, although they really did well in the 2004
game. I don’t like Kobe Bryant the most. I think basketball is a
game that requires team spirit, and not just one person should try
to dominate the game. It is disappointing to me that many people
like him.
I think NBA is a good TV program. I have learned many
basketball skills from watching that program. We have one famous
basketball team in Taiwan, but it is worse than the NBA teams. By
the way, do you watch the NBA? Which team is your favorite?
NBA
This is
my second essay,
and (“and” to connect your ideas)
I will talk (You are writing,
not talking) write
about some the NBA basketball
(Do not presume that the reader
understands what you are saying. So, mention “basketball” to be
sure) teams that I
like and those that
(“and those that…” replaces repeating the
word “teams”) some teams I don’t like.
My favorite team is New Jersey Nets,
even though
(“However” is not wrong, but even though is
better) however they didn’t play very well in the play
off game., but I
believe am confident
(“confident” means believing in things that
has not yet happened) that they will be
perform
(“perform” means “to show one’s abilities)
better in the next season.
Jason Kidd is one of my favorite players
(When you use “one of…” then the noun that follows must be plural)
in the NBA, and I think he
is the best backfielder and
because (“because” explains the
reason behind what you have said) no one can be
(“No one can be” effectively means that it
is impossible, but I think nothing can be impossible. “No one is”
means that at this moment, we do not have anyone that
good) is better than
him.(Grammar
problem) he, In
the beginning of the 2004
season, New Jersey Nets exchanged some players
(“some” must be followed by a
plural noun) to with
another teams.,
One of them is called Martin,
who is a good player, too.
I don’t like L.A. Lakers
because
(“because” explains the reasons) I think they are too
arrogant, but although
they really did well in the 2004 game. I don’t like Kobe Bryant
the most., I think basketball
is a team game that requires team
spirit,(“Team spirit” means the
ability to work together as a team)
and not just one person
should try to dominate the
(“dominating” means trying to control or
trying to be the star of the show) game.,
but that just me fell, It is
disappointing to me that
(“disappointing” means the feeling of despair when thing do not turn
out the way you expect it to) there
are many people like him.
he.
I think
NBA is a good TV program., I
have learned
many basketball skills from watching
that program.(You learned the
skills, not the rules I think) rules in the NBA.
There is We have one
famous basketball
(I presume you are talking about one of the
teams locally) game team
in Taiwan, but it is worse than
the NBA
teams.,(Comparing
teams, and not TV programs, I guess)
By
the way, do you watch
the NBA? Which team is your
favorite?
