Essay on Music and Me.
Composition Writing on Music and Me.
Music is one thing that can make people fell comfortable, I like
listen to music in my free time, that make me really relax, I like
listen pop music, light music and rock music. Pop music is because I
like be fashion and I don’t want I don’t know what people say in
this modern time; Light music can make me calm down when I am very
high or very angry; rock music let me become really high and
excited, now I want to learn guitar because I want to make a song by
myself and show to everybody, I think playing a guitar is a good
thing to let a person be nice and good.
In Taiwan, there are many music group all over
Taiwan, I think the Mayday is the best group in Taiwan, they make
music and incidental music by themselves, their songs is really good
to listen and easy to learn.
Music
Music is something that can make people feel comfortable. I like
listening to music in my free time, because that really makes me
feel relaxed. I like listening to pop music, soft music and rock
music. I like pop music because it is fashionable and I don’t want
to be left out when people talk about their favorite singers. Soft
music can make me feel calm when I am feeling anxious or angry. Rock
music makes me feel really high and excited. Now I want to learn to
play the guitar because I want to write songs by myself and play
them for everybody. I think playing a guitar is a good way to
influence a person to be nice and good.
In Taiwan, there are many pop groups. I think
“Mayday” is the best group in Taiwan because they write their own
music. Their songs are really good to listen to and easy to learn.
Music
Music
is one thing something
(“something, and not “one thing”. Well, you are not wrong, but
something is better)
that can make people fell (Wrong
spelling) feel
comfortable. , I like listening
(Like listening, like playing, like eating. Always with an “ing”) to
music in my free time, that
(“because” give the meaning and reason to what you said)
because that really makes
me really feel relaxed.,(“relax”
is a kind of feeling, so it is good to say that you feel it)
I like listening to pop
music, light soft (“soft” and not “light” music. You
are not wrong again, but soft is better) music and rock
music. I like pop music is
because it is I like be
fashionable
(Fashion is a noun, and you should use the
adjective) and I don’t want to be
left out (“left out” means to be
outside of others’ discussion topics, or not understanding what they
are talking about) I don’t
know
what when people
talk about their favorite singers. say in this modern
time; Light Soft
music can make me feel calm down when I am
feeling anxious or angry.
(“anxious” means a feeling of excitement, but in a negative way)
very high or very angry;
Rock
music let makes me
feel become really high and excited.,
Now I want to learn
to play the
(learn to lay the piano, learn to play the
violin, and so on.) guitar because I want to
write make a songs
(You do not “make songs”. You either “write”
or “compose” them) by myself and show
(Not “show” because it is not for “seeing”
but for “listening”) play them
for everybody., I think playing a guitar is a good thing
way to
influence (“influence” meaning
“affect” or to cause someone to act in a particular way)
let a person to be nice
and good.
In
Taiwan, there are many music pop
groups.
(We call them “pop groups” or “pop bands”)
all over Taiwan, I think the
(No “the” because you will not say “The Aaron”)
“Mayday”
is the best group in Taiwan,
because they make music and incidental
write their own music.
by themselves, Their
songs is are really
good to listen to and easy to
learn.
