Essay on the Movies; English Composition Writing on Watching Movies

This is my third essay. There are many kinds of movie, like action, story, comedy, romantic…, I like war movie the most, because war movie let me know how bad the war is, war is the worst way to settle a thing. There some movie is talk about WW1 and WW2, I like that, too, they let me know how is it happened and how is end.

I like action movie, too. Action movie always make me excited, it’s very interesting to watch action movie. My favorite movie is Saving private Ryan, it’s talking about the American was war to German, an American’s private’s brother are all died, than America’s government want let his mother have one son at last, so they make one team to save Ryan. There are more war movie in all world, but I like this the most, because this move is a little heart-stirring.

Teacher, do you like watch movie? which kind movie do you like the most?

Essay on the Movies

This is my third essay. There are many kinds of movies, like action movies, comedies, romance and so on.  I like war movies the most, because war movies educate us about the horrors of war. Military confrontation is the worst way to resolve differences between countries. There are movies about the two world wars. I like them too, they taught me how the wars started, and how they ended.

I like action movies, too. Action movies always make me feel excited and it’s very interesting to watch action movies. My favourite movie is “Saving Private Ryan”. The story talks about America’s war with Germany. An American almost lost all his brothers in the war, and the American government wanted to let his mother have at least one son. So they put together a platoon of soldiers to save her remaining son, Ryan.

There are many war movies in the world, but I like this the most because this movie is a little heart-stirring.

Teacher, do you like to watch movies? Which kind of movies do you like the most ?

The Movies

This is my third essay. There are many kinds of movies,(Must be in plural, because “many kinds of”) like action movies (Not “action story” but “action movies), story, comedies (Must be in plural, with an “ies”), romance (Not “romantic”, which is an adjective. Use the noun) and so on.  romantic…, I like war movies the most, because war movies educate us (War movies “educate” is better than “let me know”) let me know how bad about the horrors (“horrors” refers to the frightening experience) of the war. is, war Military confrontation (“Military” meaning “war” and “confrontation” means “face to face” or “showdown”) is the worst way to resolve difference (“resolving differences” means “settling scores” or “solving problems”) between countries. settle a thing. There are some movies is talk about the two world wars.  WW1 and WW2, I like them that, too, they let taught (“taught” as in “teach” or “educate”) me know how the wars started,  is it happened and how they is ended. (Past tense)

I like action movies, too. Action movies always make me feel excited and it’s very interesting to watch action movies. (All your nouns must be in plural form)

My favorite movie is Saving Private (Private must be in capital “P”, as in “Teacher Lin” or “Dr. Wang”) Ryan”. , it’s talking The story talks (Not “It’s talking… but “The story tells of” or “talks about”) about the America’s n was war to (“With” and not “to”) with Germany.(“German” are the people, and “Germany” is the country) , An American’s private’s almost lost all his (“Almost lost all because I think one, Private Ryan, is still alive) (Note: I have not seen the movie, and do not even know the story. So, I am trying to understand it from what your writing) brothers in the war, and the are all died, than American ’s government wanted (Past tense) to let his mother have at least (“At least” meaning “at the minimum”) one son.  at last, So they put together a (You “put together” a team of players, or in this case, a “platoon” of soldiers)  make one team platoon (A “Platoon of soldiers” is made up of about 40 soldiers) of soldiers to save her remaining son,(“Remaining” meaning “the only one left”) Ryan.

There are more (“Many” because you should not use a comparative here. You are not comparing, like “I have more apples than you) many war movies in the all world, but I like this the most because this movie is a little heart-stirring.(Or you can say “heart warming”)

Teacher, do you like to watch movies? Which kind of movies do you like the most ?


Hello Aaron,

No, I do not watch the NBA because I neither have the time nor the interest. Yes, I watch movies, and I like science fiction, action and adventure movies. Examples are Spiderman, Fantastic Four, Terminator and so on. Nothing too serious! Just pure fun...                            

Teacher Danny

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