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Essay on Love  (By 9-year old elementary school student)

Do you know what true love is? I believe that you don’t know. Because the true love is a very difficult to explain it. The true love is the person that is very love you or you very love him, do you have a lover who is the right person? If you have the right person with you than I’m going to congratulations to you. Whatever do you really know what is a right person?

I know that everyone want to have right person with, but, if you want to have the right person with. Than you must to be a good person to the other person before, than you can find a person that you were found.

LOVE

 

Do you know what the meaning of true love is? I believe that you don’t, because love is something that is very difficult to explain.

 

True love is the feeling of mutual care and concern between two people. Have you found the right person? If you have, then I am going to congratulate you.  However, do you really know when you have met the right person?

 

I know that everyone is looking for her Prince Charming. However, if you want to be successful in your search, then you must be nice to him. Only then can you find your true love.

LOVE

 

Do you know what the meaning of (You are not wrong here, but add the words “what the meaning of” reinforces the idea of the meaning behind the word) true love is? I believe that you don’t, know.(No need to repeat the word “know” here. Example, Do you like it, I believe you don’t like it) because the true love is a something that is (“a very hard to explain it” is wrong. We are saying that it is “something that is hard to explain) very difficult to explain. it.

The True love is the feeling of mutual care and concern (A feeling of mutual care and concern” refers to the feeling of wanting to take care of the other person, and show concern for him or her. “Mutual” means “both ways” meaning that you feel for him, and he feels for you.) between two people. the person that is very love you or you very love him, do you have a lover who is Have you found (“Have you found” is a better expression because it asks the questions as to whether or not you have already found him) the right person? If you have, the right person with you than then I am I’m going to congratulations to congratulate (Use the verb and NOT the noun) you. Whatever However, do you really know when you have met the (“When you have met” meaning “when you have found, or already have, or already discovered) what is a right person?

I know that everyone is looking for her Prince Charming. (“Prince Charming” is that proverbial fairy tale character who rides on a white horse with his woman, into the sunset) want to have right person with, but, However, if you want to be successful in your search, (“To be successful” in doing something means to achieve what you have set out to do) have the right person with. then you must to be a good person nice (Just say “nice” to him) to him. the other person before, than Only then (“Only then” meaning “there is no other way or choice)  you can you find your true love. a person that you were found.

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