Example Essay on Clothes. Sample Composition Writing on Clothing

Do you have a lot beautiful clothes? I have a lot beautiful clothes, The clothes will make you look very beautiful. If you can choose one clothes that you are like and wearing feels very comfortable, than you are getting good clothes. Of course the price

do not too expensive, I thing you not have enough to pay the expensive price. So you have to choose one it will comfortable, look good on you and is not too expensive clothes, it will a little difficult to do. However if get a good clothes than you will very happy.

I like to buy a lot clothes, but my mom will not let me buy a lot on a day. I will find a clothe that was good to me and my mom.

Clothes

Do you have a lot of beautiful clothes? Well, I do. Clothes will make you look very beautiful.  

If you select your favorite clothes and if wearing them makes you feel very comfortable, then you have made the right choice. Of course the price should not be too expensive. If you have a low budget, you may have to choose one that will feel comfortable, look good on you and not too expensive. It will be a little difficult to find one. However if you get suitable clothes, you will be very happy.

I like to buy a lot clothes, but my mom will not let me buy all of them in a single day. I will find clothes that are suitable for my mom and me.

 

Clothes

Do you have a lot of (need the “of” here. Grammar mistake) beautiful clothes? Well, I do. (Short and simple... “well I do” means “Yes, I have them”) I have a lot beautiful clothes, The Clothes will make you look very beautiful.

If you can choose one select (“select” means “choose”, just a new word here) your favorite (“favorite” means “things that you like best”) clothes that you are like and if wearing them makes you (“makes you feel” because that is the result of “wearing them”) feels very comfortable, then (Not “than”) you have made the right choice.(“Made the right choice” means “making the right decision”)  are getting good clothes. Of course the price should (Grammar problem here)  do not be too expensive., I thing If you have a low budget, (A “budget” is the amount of money you have set aside to buy something) you not have enough to pay the expensive price. So you may (“may” because we can not be sure that others indeed have a “low budget”) have to choose one that it will feel comfortable, look good on you and not too expensive. clothes, It will be a little difficult to find one. (“find one” meaning “to search for one) do. However if you get suitable (“suitable” meaning “fit for a particular purpose) a good clothes, than you will be very happy.

I like to buy a lot clothes, but my mom will not let me buy all of them in a single (“in a single day” means “in one day”. “Single” means “one”) a lot on a day. I will find a clothes that are suitable (as explained before) was good to for me and my mom and me..(Not “me and my mom”, but “my mom and me”)

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